"You reckon he could still take a crocidile?"

I think you should make a followup with their actual friendship.

Ooooooh, I wanna see Vetinari fight a crocodile! :) lol, great fic! :)

The image of modern day Lord V wrestling a crocodile is actually incredibly sexy.

Beautiful. It stays in the character close enough and brings to mind all the correct images for a Terry Prachett story. well done!

So cute.

Great Pratchett-esque voice.

Nice.

Ok, that is just pure genious. Seriously.

Poor Leonard, he must have had a rotten time at the Assassins' Guild school! (But then again, maybe not...)

rofpmsl! awesome intro to the one-and-only Vetinari!

Ha, I like it. I would like it if you could expand on Wayne a bit more in another story, he seems an interesting character, though that, is of course at your discretion.

Brilliant! It was great and funny and made of awesome :D

This isn't going to be a particularly constructive review, I'm afraid, more of an insanely happy fangirl one ;)

In short, this has absolutely made my day! The image of Vetinari wrestling a crocodile (both young and old V) is priceless and wonderful, and it's strangely satisfying to see him get one up on Downey in the physical stakes as well as the cerebral ones. Would love to see a Croc Vs Lord V rematch set up by Vimes. How would the present day Vetinari react to that, I wonder?

All in all, it's bloody brilliant and I love it.

Estelle Tiniwiel -x-