Reviews for 40k: ToyHammer
valhalan guardsman chapter 33 . 7/13
can we like, get any kind of update on this fanfic? either tell us that its 100% dead, or make an update, please
Are you ok chapter 33 . 7/4
We’re are you? This is a great story pls don’t give up on it
Guest chapter 31 . 5/25
"Bracer" aka Cerabrate, will soon find out that one cannot run from Ainz justice. Really looking forward to seeing him getting what he deserves. He went from fighting beastmen to save his Kingdom to selling people to them.

Thanks for all the updates, really made memorial day memorable.
heavenly777protector chapter 21 . 5/18
OI BIG BOSS ROGUE VECTOR, WHEN ARE DA BOYZ GONNA AV A LARF? AN IF IT'S POSSIBLE, CAN WE GET A SCOTTISH ORK BOI, BECAUSE ORANGE UNZ MIGHT GO FASTA!
BowmanW chapter 14 . 5/10
I understand that this is your fanfiction and you are writing what you want to write, but I really found it a shame that this fanfiction seems to be going for a more serious angle as the story progresses. I was hoping it would stay in the relatively light hearted realm and be a lot more comedy focused as the designated 'Humor' genre of this fanfiction would imply.

Yes, I do know how silly it is to be reading a Warhammer 40k fanfiction and to not expect some grim topics and scenes to come up. I'm not actually a proper fan of Warhammer, just randomly came upon this fanfiction out of pure chance, so that might explain things a bit.

Saying that, this fanfiction is still great, but I will be dropping it here mostly because I felt that the story is straying from its initial focus and I came to read a comedy driven story, not a story with some pretty serious story moments.

TL:DR: I hate drama and I find it a shame that things are getting more serious.
heavenly777protector chapter 10 . 4/23
Ok this is my first review: I LOVE THIS STORY IT HAS EVERYTHING PITCH PERFECT!
now that i have greased the ego: i think major chip hazard/commando elite as stormtroopers or hardened vets or even astartes? and the Gorgonites should make a cameo here. I think Archer would be great as a Tau Character (toy soldiers). also A SCEN were IG are comparing various real-life AFV's or watching some kind of ANCIENT Terran documentary on ww2 would be cool.
Stephen chapter 1 . 4/21
I am liking this so far!
CtzerSnake chapter 33 . 4/21
RIP
Great chapter chapter 33 . 4/11
But I need more I know you’re not going to read this but if you are pls bring this story back (this story has been dead since 2014 so yea) I know there are a lot of reasons for stopping the writing of this story but pls bring it back
Lord of the ring chapter 20 . 4/9
That reference was pretty funny good chapter
GrindingV2 chapter 15 . 3/1
Why would a music artist need to clear a stovepipe?
Here's a link to raping vs rapping /NARxgXEdlzs

Loving the story so far! Hope it stays consistent :D
Fanfiction Scrutinizer chapter 1 . 9/6/2019
Hot take: I felt this story really lost its charm when it started deviating from the whole toy narrative and into "stakes are high, let's save the universe from Chaos", increasingly jarring when the God Emperor was introduced into the body of a little girl. The human characters, save Michael, are annoying also; dare I say borderline unnecessary.

This would've performed much better as a slice of life and it's lack of pulse shows.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/8/2019
Something for the past chapters. There are some sections that need scene breaks. Otherwise it's good.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/4/2019
I enjoyed that u used the cultist voice from Dawn of War, and the Vader quote was expertly timed!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/30/2019
Holy crap, if there ever was a three stooges AND Bruce Lee movie, I would lose my mind! Some incidental typos, but made for a great read!
And Boblee, the Eldar ranger? Someone has been watching 'Shooter'
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