| Reviews for Return Of The Faint Smile |
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pangaokao chapter 109 . 7/31 pleeeeease let Teresa and Clare end up together. after this long journery how could they not? |
pangaokao chapter 117 . 7/30 good to find such an wonderful story about my dearest pairing. |
Maegash1r4 chapter 117 . 7/2 Man, you totally made me regret my last review with this chapter. Should have had more faith. Well the title says it all. Also, thanks for how this is going on. Best Story ever. |
longbowchris50 chapter 114 . 6/8 is this still rated t, or should it be m. |
Maegash1r4 chapter 116 . 6/6 I have to skip this until the master-slave stuff is over. I hope it doesn't take as long as the miria is captured chapters. It's just that I'm simply not into this. The rest is ok I guess. Roxanne is really cool and the upcoming battle is promising great suspense. |
Dany le fou chapter 116 . 6/5 I'd like to apologize if the comment about times between updates came out wrong. It's just, sometimes you update as fast as 10-15 days, and sometimes it takes much longer, and we have no way to know which one it will be. I know it's difficult to have a set schedule and that you cannot command inspiration. But I'll admit, I'm always getting hopeful when the mark for a 'fast' update approaches, and disappointed when it passes. LOL for a moment I could imagine Evelina wearing a maid outfit while serving Miria. Is Miria once again getting overconfident over her control of Evelina? On the one hand, the Goddess has received a nasty lesson. On the other hand, just one slip of drug would put Miria at Evelina's mercy again. BTW, it's just a small detail, but the so-called cold steel used in chapter 105 has not been mentioned even once since then. It's just a bit weird that you introduced something and no longer use it afterwards. |
Maegash1r4 chapter 114 . 5/18 I think pills and poisons and potions are overused as plot devices here. I want the organizations pharmacists in real life now. Then again, I absolutely wouldn't mind if a final cure for Hysterias condition would suddenly appear, so please keep at least that plot device :-) This chapter was also purely awesome and worth the wait. Thanks for writing! |
Dany le fou chapter 114 . 5/12 ZOMG Teresa got laid! I can imagine the legions of Teresa fans being outraged, and Clare hunting down the guy - LOL. More seriously, looks like she is in a pinch now and will indeed experience Maddy's highest level sessions. The scary things is, Teresa could apparently still get out at the moment but she still thinks she has the upper hand. When you think you are in control, you usually aren't. Since you have shown that syringes exist, Maddy can simply inject her with more drug while she is weakened. A high-concentrated version directly in her bloodstream would hit her even harder than anything Miria had. Small funny moment with Roxanne having to babysit Miata. Except that Roxanne is also up to her old tricks, which isn't good. Just a tiny detail. This is my personal interpretation, but I find it a little odd that Teresa couldn't sense Roxanne or Miata. It's shown in canon that Galatea and Tabitha can sense warriors who have taken suppressants (though not those who have been repressing their Yoki for years). Since Teresa's abilities also heavily rely on sensing, I'd assume she should also be able to do it. Then again, this could be handwaved to Teresa and Galatea not focusing on the same things when they sense Yoki. I hope the next chapter will not take six weeks to come... |
Maegash1r4 chapter 113 . 3/28 Thanks for the update. This is very much appreciated for staying at home and not going outside. Also this chapter rocks again. At least Theresa got everything under control. Miria got owned pretty hard by Maddy again witg Maddys 'Water under the Bridge' attitude. |
Guest chapter 113 . 3/25 On the one hand it nice to see Teresa to be cool and in control for once, on the other, of the story has taught me anything is that she is extremely overconfident and in all likelihood will require saving once she fucks up gets beaten, captured and potentially mind broken. Hope it doesn't happen, but it seems likely. Looking forward to finding out what happens next |
Maegash1r4 chapter 112 . 3/13 Wow, the last two chapters were really satisfying awesome with theresa being the main person who is holding all the strings. This is how it should be for a story where the title suggests that she is here to kick asses. And it seems that great danger lies ahead. Or why would she care for clare as a backup. I'm not talking a guess what happens next. I will be wrong anyway. |
VampireNinjaz chapter 112 . 3/11 I’ve been reading this since the beginning!️ I absolutely love it. I’m still deeeeeep deep in my heart wishing for some Theresa x Clare though lol. |
Dany le fou chapter 112 . 3/11 Err, I think you made a small mistake : you have "I can help Stephanie" but you probably meant Hysteria. |
Guest chapter 112 . 3/11 If Teresa ends up broken like Miria I'm gonna be very, very annoyed. Don't know what her plan is, or what's happening, yet I want more |
Maegash1r4 chapter 110 . 12/14/2019 That chapter made up for the more depressing once where Miria was trapped. So sweet. It's also nice that Galatea and Isley survived. Also you're getting some progress done with the story and hopefully shed some light about who the fuck Rubel is anyway. Teresa did a good thing to simply kidnap that rube :-) |