Reviews for Excuses
Shamangirl1 chapter 4 . 12/10/2013
I LOVE that Sigmund got his own chapter!
Kung-fu Blaziken chapter 5 . 2/21/2011
AWWW! She's like a nanny!

I think...
Kung-fu Blaziken chapter 4 . 2/21/2011
Sigmund's a nut. He's a nice nut, but he's a nut.
Kung-fu Blaziken chapter 3 . 2/21/2011
His thoughts upon realizing his mistake?

"Why isn't it WORKING?"

"Because it's NOT a time machine, Alister! The Clock isnt' meant to alter time, only KEEP IT!"

And at that moment, he fully comprehends the gravity of his mistake.

"I'm so sorry..."
Kung-fu Blaziken chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Introspective. An interesting look inside Clank's mind.
Jelfia Maleak chapter 5 . 2/14/2010
i can't believe i did not comment this the first time i read it. this is a great well written shorts. keep it up.
bluebuckle chapter 5 . 12/29/2009
Okay, wow, you are a WONDERFUL writer - and I am so glad that you've chosen to write for the Ratchet and Clank fandom, it really made my day. I just read all five of these chapters and loved every single one of them. Reading this actually has me considering posting my own fic for Ratchet and Clank should I muster up enough courage, but until then I'll just wait patiently for another chapter.

Hope to see an update soon!
Nicole Silverwolf chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
I love satisfying endings to stories...and ACiT I think really did provide a wonderful one. But these little afterwords are just the right epilogue too. I can't say I have a favorite one though I have a soft spot for Clank and Aphelion's observations.

Lovely work! Thanks for sharing it and I look forward to more if you write again in this fandom!
Samu chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
This chapter was absolutely adorable. Clank going over his 'excuse' to stay with Ratchet and his thoughts on the events in the game was really interesting to read. You did a great job on capturing Ratchet and Clank in this. Also, I think I reacted the same way to Ratchet's death. I could never forgive Alister after that, even with his sacrifice.
Nobility chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Oh, trust me. You weren't the only cooing. _

And now this story's got me cooing! Wonderful vignettes. It fits perfectly in with the feel of the games.

I love Clank's observation of Azimuth and Ratchet's father. It shows you just how much Ratchet means to him. It's especially poignant that Clank loves Ratchet for being Ratchet (and not in that way, sickos!), especially when you consider the fact that most others don't. The galaxy either sees him as that hero who saved the galaxy one time, a bumbling actor, or just a lombax.

My only criticism is you sometimes over-use "..." It's a little repetitive. Generally, if you can use a single period over three, it's best if you go with the period.
Lomcat93 chapter 3 . 10/30/2009
You did a great job at capturing some strong emotions in this story. You're writing style is excellent, too. Good job with the story. )

However, I can't help feeling that it's a little too early to be posting fics on R&C: ACIT when there are so many spoilers. But, at least you said there were going to be spoilers; some writers don't even warn about spoilers.

Excellent job, though. ;)
Tina Tissue chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Wait, did Azimuth die?