I really liked this story, it was cute!
It was the first fanfiction I read about that manga and I don't regret it.
It's a pity that it's so short!
PS: Sorry for my poor english, I'm a french girl.

I followed your link from Mangafox, haha. :)

I really liked it, since the manga moves fast, it's nice to take a breather and read a stetched out version of everybody's feelings.

I love the " Genderless wonder."line For some reason it made me laugh...

There were a few grammar issues, but they were so minor that they were easy to ignore.