Reviews for The Girl in the Snow
Guest chapter 5 . 3/18
Good things had better happen to Nami after what you are putting her through, poor girl
Guest chapter 4 . 3/18
I think nami has it hard enough , but now she’s being bullied on her first day at school , not a fan
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18
Interested to see where this goes
ImUberCool chapter 10 . 3/10/2018
man, if only their relationship was better :/
ImUberCool chapter 7 . 3/10/2018
ARLOOOOOOONG
Guest chapter 10 . 3/9/2016
Please update
Zyrothe chapter 10 . 8/27/2015
Is this in the same universe as One Piece or is this an AU?
Token peach chapter 10 . 8/12/2015
YAY! I love this story! Please update soon!
Guest chapter 10 . 8/6/2015
AWW so sweet UPDATE SOON OR I'LL KILL YOU
Hotspot the 626th chapter 10 . 8/4/2015
Cool, an update. Definitely noticed a change in writing, but before or after the five years its still a good read. Hope to read more soon!
davidjoker chapter 10 . 8/4/2015
OH MY GOD! Where have you been! I've been waiting for so LONG! Did you know that your story is in my top 5 LuffyxNami stories ever and you wait this long? Well, as long as you keep updating then all is forgiven. Just please promise to finish the story and to not leave us hanging. please?

It was a very good chapter. although a little slow in the beginning and not as much interaction between Luffy and Nami. although I understand that you have to explain whats been going on for them on the ship for the past few years. and I really like your old writing style when you spaced things apart. less paragraphs, you know? And I love the ending of this chapter and cent wait for the next one and then the next one and then the one after that and the one after that, all the way up to the end of the story. And I cant wait for the romance between Luffy and Nami to finally happen. but don't get me wrong, I don't want you to rush it or anything. go at the pace you wanted for this story. also the sentences felt like they went on for awhile. maybe try adding more periods instead of multiple commas. but then again, I suck at writing and grammar so who am I to talk?

Anyway, good chapter, love that you're writing the story again and cant wait for the next chapter to one of my top 5 LuffyxNami stories.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/15/2015
i love this story... so i hope u update this story again...
Strict reader chapter 9 . 4/15/2015
That is so depressing u should of made it more brighter it was just sad nothing really happy happend so yh.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/22/2015
Now I'm sad! Update soon! I thought this was cute and sweet! Please please pleeeeeease update! I want more soooo bad! It's a great story be proud of it!
-SeaDragon54
FIRExNINJAxDROID chapter 9 . 3/20/2015
Update soon plz
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