What a moving story. Sniff sniff. I like that you have incorporated Harry's flaws into your portrait of him. This has a beautiful, gentle, bittersweet feel about it. Thanks for writing.

Oh, this was so well written and so, well, sweet. Your characterizations of Harry, Malcolm, Zaff and Adam were perfect. And I'm so glad that Ruth did actually have a discussion about, and a reaction to, Adam and Zaf's deaths. I know the show is only an hour long, but the only indication we got that Ruth was distressed at all was the look on her face when Lucas introduced himself. I hope someone filled her in as to details of some kind. I always love your stories. I am never disappointed in your characterizations or your plot developments. This is one of the best Ruth/Harry stories I've read. Thanks for sharing.

A great ending for this fic. I really liked the letters from Zaf and Adam, it was a lovely touch.

I liked that it came down to plain 'old fashioned' tradecraft for Harry to find Ruth. Nice simple solution!

Aw. That's beautiful. A lovely end to a delicate, gently written fic. You've struck an elegant chord in your writing here - I have very much enjoyed the pace of it. Or maybe I'm just grateful for the image of Cap'n Harry...! ;-)

Whoops, thought I'd already reviewed this, but it appears not - sorry! I really like this - particularly your description of Harry afloat, as you capture the slightly more relaxed Harry so well. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this next.

Whoops, thought I'd already reviewed this, but it appears not - sorry! I really like this - particularly your description of Harry afloat, as you capture the slightly more relaxed Harry so well. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this next.

It does make sense, yes...but, of course, it still leaves questions; what is his plan? What are his watchers going to do?

Hopefully the wait to find out won't be too long!

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Nice second chapter, I know how hard chapters that set the scene can be to write so well done for making it an enjoyable one. Looking forward to seeing what Harry's plan is!

Very interesting start and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Well written and paced as always and I'm hoping you'll be posting more soon x

Delightful! Always appreciate your writing. Wonderful language as ever, and I'm interested to see where this is going. Like the dip into Harry's past with Bill and Jane - very convincingly done. Thanks for sharing :-)

I'm very intrigued, Lynn. It's well written, too; cryptic yet still tinged with the sadness which we've become accustomed to associating with Harry post 5.5. I really hope you post more soon.

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Really good story so far, I really like how you allow us to see Harry's thought processes.