Such a lose to such a gifted writer, god bless u n yours

Gabby
This story is amazing :). Your sister was a great writer. I'm Sorry for your Loss

Gabby;

I'm not sure if you even still check for reviews. But, I'm sorry. I wish I could say somethng else, but don't know what. Her stories were really good. May she rest in peace, and may you stay strong.

I really like your story so far, I'm also a total TIVA fan too. This story is really coming along and I like where you are taking it.

I'm very sorry for your loss, I really enjoyed reading her stories. Perhaps you should think about continuing some of them. If not, then they are still great. Your sister had a real talent for writing and giving the character a different personality even though the characters are already given a designated personality. Again, I'm very sorry for your loss.

I really wish I could like Mickey cause she's abbys sis but no she can't have Tony

i know this won't mean much coming from a stranger but your sister had a talent for writing that i greatly enjoyed and i am sorry for your loss.

So does that mean she passed away? If so im sorry for your loss and I hope she's happy where she is.

Wow i am so sorry for your lost, and i am happly i got to read you sisters stories before she passed, and hang in there Gabby, it will be extremely hard but dont let it you eat you up inside. again im am so sorry.

-Victoria

I am so, so sorry for your loss! I know that doesn't really help, but even so, I know I loved reading Kelli's stories! God bless you too, and you hang in there!

Aww...OMG!...I'm so sorry to hear that...sorry for your loss...take care...her stories were great!

gabby this is kevin. just wanted to say im truely sorry about your sister and im here if you ever want to talk.

I really like the story...You've done a great job so far...I hope you continue it

i really like this story, and i think it would be horrible for it to go to waste.

you should have mickey find out from the gossip going around (or abby) about them dating...and have her get REALLY mad and maybe try to kill ziva? or maybe kidnap ziva and attempt to kill her. :)

hope you continue! :)

How about (now that they're not a secret anymore) Mickey gets really jealous while Tony and Ziva are falling just more and more in love. now Mickey is pissed and she keeps trying to get with Tony before he is totally Ziva's (even though he knows he already is). THen just going off on a lim, Tony gets drunk, almost hooks up with Mickey, and Ziva gets really pissed. Drama, and you could add some more McAbby to make it interesting. Just an idea from a hopeful fan. Please update soon, it really is an amazing story, don't ever doubt that! Ever! Hope this helps with your inspiration. I will be waiting and checking your story every day! :)

-Julia