To be completely honest, I didn't start out reading this story with high expectations. I mean, with an NCIS/Incredibles crossover, I kind of expected a crack fic... That being said, holy crap! It was so good! I was completely enthralled from beginning to end, and I did not want to stop reading. The plot was there and surprisingly captivating. The character development was inspiring and heartwarming. I only wish it was longer. Overall, what a surprisingly wonderful story!

Good story. Liked it a lot... except the ending. Kind of abrupt. Guess I hoped for more info about Sam, his wife and son and Callen too. And Gibbs. And Tim and Hetty and Sarah... and Gibbs. But good story.

Wow! This is a completely awesome story. I read it pretty much in one sitting and plan on sharing it with my daughter and grandchildren, who love the Incredibles and NCIS. Bonus for me, Tim is my absolute favorite character on NCIS, along with Hetty! Kudos!

:) very good

Wonderful story! And we suspected about Hetty all along!

Absolutely loved it! It was so flipping awesome!

bwahaha that was hilarious i new Tim was going to have something tech based but in the net work that just genius!

back again, I just re-read this a few weeks ago but this one is one of my favorite stories of yours. I just love it because it feels like you brought the incredibles to life but a different side to it. I always did think Hetty was a lot like Edna and the fact that you ran with that is kind of awesome. I love your stories. I just love when the team is more like a family. I mean on the show they let you see some of that but not much because mostly it's about the cases. vary rarely do they show the other sides of them. yet when one of them is in trouble they do what they can for them. I always feel like with your stories we get to see the side of them we would have seen on the show if they gave the characters a chance to show their lives outside of work more often.

Ah now, that was very satisfying. Of courser, much has changed at NCIS since this story waS GOOD STORY AND THE CHARACTERS MOSTLY FITTING HOW THEY WRITTEN. I LOVED THIS

If I didn't know it was fiction you'd have me nervous; and I do believe governments almost always over reached themselves

Oh dear, the trouble with science fiction in our ever changing world is that actual acience keeps catching up with it. Poor McGee

I'm glad i read this. What first caught my attention was the name: Cape Fear. That's where I live. Well, technically it is Wilmington, NC. but the Cape Fear River borders the west side of the county and the Atlantic is the eastern border. Where the two meet at the south end of the county is - Cape Fear.

Anyhow, your story was intriguing and quite well done. I quite enjoyed it! Best wishes to you now and in the future.

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This was so amazing! I loved it so much that I just couldn't put it down! I can't tell you how many times I laughed at all The Incredibles references :) Awesome job!

Treating Supers like this would only ensure an uprising. Grrrrrrrrrr. Hateful governments. Gotta love Hetty. Too bad I dislike Densi so much I had to stop watching NCIS:LA.

Just found this one in Communities. Loved it! Did you ever continue this adventure? If not, will you? I see a whole series here... I wish.
Again... loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!