Reviews for Waterfall |
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AreYouReady chapter 1 . 5/29/2015 this is perfect. beautiful. amazing. |
nothingcompaires chapter 1 . 9/28/2012 Usually when I read something as short as this I don't expect to find such a treasure but wow... this is so perfect. "She wants him to carry her next to his skin all day. She wants to feel she's part of him, the way he is her. And she feels bad for having thoughts like that. Light loves her more than anything. He just works so hard, and is so tired, and so frustrated with the taskforce holding him back." That is so perfectly in character and so sad because we all know that she probably did feel exactly like this. Being so in love with someone like him could really only leave her longing and wishing but then feeling so bad about it. Sweet, and a little heartbreaking. "In the air vent, the tiny hidden camera whirrs at a level beyond human hearing, and monitors her every move." This was interesting to me. Does that mean that Light was watching her do this? Gahhh... It opens a thousand doosr with a thousand different, and equally interesting possibilities. In the context of this story, I'm glad that she kept the shirts. :) Great read, excellent writing, thanks for such a wonderful story. |
Allen Skylark chapter 1 . 12/30/2009 Wow. This is beautiful and poignant. Brilliant as expected. |
great gospel chapter 1 . 10/31/2009 Wow, it was simply amazing! With Misa trying on his clothes and all you'd think it be some kind of humor, but you twisted it around and gave it a whole new meeting. I applaude your work! :D ~BC |
Old-Soul-Rock-n-Roll chapter 1 . 10/28/2009 amazing! you've got a way with words |
Perry-Dice chapter 1 . 10/28/2009 This is just lovely. You do an amazing job with the little details that manage to send a big message. |