Great job please continue

Xavier and Jean would both have the Yamanaka Mind powers.
X would have Yin, Lightning & Wind.
Jean with Yin, Wind & Fire.
Storm has the Storm Style easily, Yin, Wind, Water & Lightning.
Logan might have the Dead Bone Pulse so Yang and Earth style with an adapted Metal Style.
Scott; Plasma Style Yin, Fire and Lightning.
Even; Wood Style, Yin, Water and Earth.
Kurt would have Yang, Fire, Earth (Brimstone) and Wind (Sulfur)
Kitty; Yin, Wind and Smoke Style.
Rogue... honestly with her power, All, Fire, Wind, Lightning, Earth, Water, Yin and Yang.
Bobby; Ice Style, Yin, Wind and Water.

that's all the x-men you've named so far, I think.

Good job on the start

and he calls himself a ninja. what a joke

i like it keep up the good work

really? ...Ino? as in Ino the drama queen? dude really? sure she is hot I just don't see then getting along THAT well. Sakura...hell no that is a abusive relationship waiting to happen ...even though it does and they are just teammates. Hinata ...is more level-headed and going by personality and characteristics she would be just right for naruto and yet idiots don't like her why? because unlike the Pink Banshee she won't have Anger issues? actually trained to be a Kunoichi unlike the pink-haired fangirl? (sakura only trained to be a kunoichi when SasUKE turned traitor how sad is that?) Ino sure she trained but unless you were blind her and Sakura TKO'ed each other in the 2ND ROUND of the Chunnin Exams with one punch...worse fight I ever saw.

Naruto means fishcake, and fishcake only! Stop this stupid fanfic delusion. Naruto was ALWAYS written in katakana, there isn't kanji... open manga for fcks sake its free on the net! Its like saying John means GOD! But it means this: "The grace or mercy of the Lord."
And no need to make new meanings for them, just to blow your ego!

Also this story sucks ass already, Naruto overconfident, overpowered and OOC!

nicely done

Your trying a bit too hard to make Naruto look badass.

summary says naruto killed the person who ruined his life but he killed madara but instead he should have killed minato

dude.. the song is so funny
can't stop laughing!

i like it

A VERY AWESOME STORY continue please!

This is difficult to read. It's comprehensible enough, but all of the extra punctuation marks and the dialogue leave much to be desired. I'd wish you luck with your fic but you haven't updated in over a year.

come back i will read this