Not a bad story, no? Ellen sounded quite a bit more mature, less naive than in the game. You've got to admit, she was ridiculously naive.

Rather deep, poetic... Ellen was in character, if a little older, a little more grown-up. Keats was Keats, that all I have to say on THAT.

That was poetic, really deep, maybe a lot real, and I like it for sure! It was great!

Ellen sounded more mature than what I expected, but it still was Ellen (and Keats was Keats, for sure xD)

It was really, really good! Awesome work!

I would like to read more stories like that :D

Take care! :3

This is probably the 3rd time I'm reading this again xD I really like it! 3

Interesting. Never would think that Ellen would be the type to lose her virginity, especially to a random fellow. As for her and Keats, it's hard to say. I had a feeling they might have something, but at the same time not quite. While it's true that Keats is both a figment of what Herve might have been and at the same time nothing at all related to him save for the picture drawn up by Cecilia, the two do form a kind of relationship.