I don't get the "No one" at the end... ? But not bad.

I love Mori, but I never thought Haruhi was really his type. But I still liked this story! My only question is, how did he get hurt/cut? I mean, she had to grab the first aid kit, but for what!? Otherwise, I thought it was cute! When I read the 'crisis cross applesauce' I bust up laughing and my mom was like, "What the hell are you reading?" When I told her, she jus told me to get over myself, because I'm only 13, but I'd appreciate it if you write another chapter, please!

iTS good and adorable but i don't under stand that last part

I like the story a lot. You can never have enough MoriHaru stories. I am a bit confused as to what they are refering to with the "No one".

Hehehe! Awwwww! :)

i love it! i think you should put more intense kissing before mori goes for the shirt. please continue! pleaseeeeeeeeeesss

Cute it's a nice story

U really should continue!

'criss cross apple sauce' Oh my gosh I laughed so hard! This is good, if a teeny bit ooc. Cute, and once again, I loved that line.

Reviewing cos there can never b enough haru/mori stories :) Well done (Y)

Er, very sweet and all, bravo bravo! But, what did "no one" mean? Danke!

Cheers,

Eliza.

Aww I love it (:

Its adorable 3

And I'd like to read more

Or this story with every single host *3*

this is good

i like this story, its a very simple love story thats not complicated. :) I enjoyed it...thanks..

kawaii desu ne! great story