Wasn't mark it was Nate, calling it now

Really loved this story. At first Shane was a complete jerk and I didn't think he and Mitchie should be together at all. But midway through you really gave both of them a lot of layers and I liked that you didn't make it easy.

I hate reading fanfiction stories where Shane ruins Mitchie's life and all he has to say when they finally see each other again is "the record company made me do it" and it's better in the next paragraph. You really made them both work for this relationship which made the payoff so much better.

My only complaint about your writing style is, I'm not a fan of your use of "You" as a weird sort of first (2nd?) person device. At times it was confusing as to whom you where referring to, especially once you switched to Shane's and other people's view points. I also loved your Mandy character and wish we actually met Haley and had a little more from Pink. But great story!

This story was absolutely amazing! I really love it so much! I won't lie, there were points where I was in the love hate spot but truthfully I loved it so much! It was pure wicked amazingly awesome. I loved everything! I knew it from the beginning of the stolen money that it was Jade. I would always yell at my screen while reading it when ever that was mentioned before they knew it was her that it was Jade! This was so great. It's so much different but at the same time it's not. It was just amazing. You had my eyes watery at points and pretty much all emotions. I loved also this chapter and the back and forth from what was going on and then flashbacks into certain parts, that was really amazing. This was just amazing in general though. Everything about it was amazing! :D

I loved the ending. Although it was a bit drama filled and you wanted to smack Mitchie for not making up her mind about what she wanted... Either way though i really loved the story

This was an amazing story! You are a really talented writer! I hope you write other stories soon!

when are you going to post more of this?

I'm dying for this story.

:'(

I loved this story! Great job! :)

Hey ))

This story was amazing. You are one of the most talented writers in this section.

I heard about your fathers passing. I can't imagine what you are going through, but I can express my deepest condolences, and pray that you get through this and become a stronger person because of it.

Keep the faith.

wow

This was amazing!

I loved this story

The ups and downs and plot twists

And I had a feeling that Jade was the one who took the money all along

this is AMAZING~

SHIT. FUCKING TESS.

ITS JADE.

MAN FIGHT. God. So glad you included that. sometimes, all a story needs is a good fucking up. :D

love it so far!