Reviews for Concessions
MTDSOW chapter 7 . 6/4
Uhh… are you going to continue this… or no? If not, do you know if anyone else has continued it?
david chapter 2 . 5/26
Honestly, I don't see how a mother could willingly abandon her child in that manner. To be fair, this is the second chapter and it is possible that something occurred behind the scenes that we don't yet know about , but given that she knew Minato was going to die from sealing the Kyuubi, it's really unbelievable that Kushina would run off to her death like that, essentially leaving Naruto as an orphan.
Bb34 chapter 7 . 5/21
Please update
Felicja chapter 7 . 5/6
Ah, I've truly enjoyed reading this story. It's so well written and surprisingly unique in regard to its TimeTravel AU-aspects. I can't recall reading any other baby-time-traveller-Naruto story and I did not expect to enjoy it, but I have - I've enjoyed it a great, great lot and it saddens me to see it (most possibly) abandoned. That being said, thank you very much for writing so far. You are a fantastic writer and I hope you will find yourself writing again in the future - I'm sure you could create many more wonderful pieces. Cheers.
damienfarrar10 chapter 1 . 4/11
Good start.
The ChocoGoat chapter 7 . 4/8
Ah,
Have I done a mistook .
Usually I don't mind too much when it's unfinished but this one had too much story potential. Please, if you have time, continue...
I really enjoyed this one(ᴗ) lol little drooling baby Sasuke. Are you going to stop baby Hinatas kidnap attempt? An Alive Hizashi is always fun.
FlowersBite chapter 3 . 3/1
Minato is such a good Hokage. I love seeing how they all interact with baby naruto.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4
ok so I have to say that the misogyny of the first chapter is very off putting. the way namakazi talks about kushina and her death and how useless and unnecessary it was and how dare she leave their kid like that is super ooc and does not make sense/ is not explained very well in this chapter.
I'm willing to try and continue this story to see if the blatant and unnecessary character bashing continues. so far I wouldn't recommend this to anyone though.
Tbookworm chapter 7 . 10/28/2019
Thank you for sharing your work. I noticed that you have not updated any thing in several years. I understand that life can get hectic, but I hope that you have not stopped writing completely. I also hope that someday you will finish this story; as I enjoyed what you have done so far, and am curious to see your ending. Thank you again for sharing your work.
Mariusz1988 chapter 7 . 8/29/2019
Is the story dead? Would be a shame.
Bosma19 chapter 7 . 8/7/2019
I really love this story story just read it I love how you have written your characters one thing I am curious about is is naruto ever going to tell Minato he is from the future and will naruto act like his mental age or physical age
CandyBurst chapter 1 . 7/12/2019
Awesome, adorable, interesting and everything else I want in a Naruto story. Thank you for the wonderful read!
Monster King chapter 7 . 4/9/2019
Great work I hope you continue the story
Guest chapter 7 . 3/22/2019
Update plz!
dragoncaller45 chapter 7 . 2/24/2019
Well, hot damn, I figured this would be another badly handled/worded crap-fic about an op Naruto but, well, I've been proven wrong. Nice!
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