I empathize with Momo. She's like me in this premise, though mine's reality. I cried a bit, and I should hate you for that but strangely enough, I'm okay. Thank you.

This was really sweet. The perspective it is written from is one which I'd want my Toushirou-fantasizing friends to read though because it makes it personal. I have friends who actually fantasize about them/Toushirou which is wrong for me because Karin is the only person I can understand him being with so thank you! :D

Awww... Poor Momo.
Loved it. What else can I say?

-Queen of Narnia49

poor Momo, but i like Karin and toshiro together

wow! It is about time Toushirou gets appreciated.

DAMN! you are good! i didn't even realize this was in second person until the end. and s2nd person is really hard to write. congrats. you've got some serious talent

This was lovely. I'm a huge fan of Karin/Hitsu, mostly because I feel that Hinamori doesn't deserve him after everything, and I can't fathom a way for them to get together after everything thats transpired with Aizen. But you didn't bash her in this, which I loved. She was realistic and wonderful and I loved this. Great work.

...Oh wow. You pulled quite a show there. You know I don't like Hinamori...but after reading some of your ficts... You wrote her character beautifully here. Really. I'm speechless.

This is just lovely. I like how you wrote in Hinamori's POV and viewed both Karin and Toushiro from her end. And the ending. I really love it. It made me shiver.

Great job!

I really liked this! The Momo POV was great and really gave a good outside view of their relationship.

Nicely done. I really do love your writing style. Keep it up!

But it’s easy to be infuriated with her. This line crack me. Or is it just me? Well, She's a Kurosaki. That's to be expected.

But it's really nice to see Toushirou and Karin's relationship in Momo's point of view. Lovelovelove this short story. As usual your writing style stands out. :)

Thank you for this story!

What a great story. I enjoyed how you wrote the story in Hinamori's view point on the Karin and Hitsugaya relationship.

That was beautiful. I like how it's written in a simple but effective style.

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Correction:

{Part of you wonders why your clinging so tightly to fairytale dreams.} you're.

loved it.

its simple and beautifully written, but still...strong and powerful.

i adore that Hinamori is portrayed as a really good and supportive person. she has faults, she's bitter sometimes and jealous sometimes, but that doesn't make her a nasty person. i like Hinamori, i just don't think that she belongs with Hitsugaya. and so often in HitsuKarin fics she is this horrid, nasty person. but that isn't staying true to her character. i think that you kept her in character really well even though she didn't end up with Hitsy. and unfortunately that doesn't happen often enough. thank you.

and of course, i can't get enough of this pairing, so i'm tremendously pleased with that.

over all, lovely.

-Triple L

Nice work on this. You know... You've actually managed to make me dislike Hinamori a little bit less then I currently do (which is a hell of a lot), so kudos on that. Very well done, keep up the great work.