It was a good story but at times was hard to read because it didn't have all the words in a sentence that it should have had. It's a great idea, and it played out well. Good job.

Why has no one reviewed this? It was good. ;) No one really portrays Tai's self doubt. It's so cute though. Liked it. Hopefully people will follow suit, and review more. So, Good Story! Buh Bye! -