love this story. it made me cry so much

My heart! I'm crying.

Ah. My heart

Yes. Please write a sequel. This story is amazing and I feel you could make a fantastic sequel for it. Plus who doesn't want more Hiei romance. XD

Oh my, I would so love sequel, to see how everything evolved after years. When she grew, learned new things and remembered old ones. I am so thankful for this bitter sweet ending you have no idea and words can't even begin to describe it. Thank you for this. So happy I decided to read this fic.

making me cry. cant wait for the next update

OK so at first I was like WTF woman, what are you doing to him? Like geez, we get, he's in pain and all that but come on.
Then of course we get hope, just a tad that where might be a way around all that has happened, all the pain and torture endured.
And then you freaking end the chapter because urgh.
I am mad at you right now, but lovely chapter nonetheless.

Is there a reason you're using the masculine Aaron for your OC's name rather than the feminine Erin?

Yessss finally their are back. Missed them so much. I understand the sentiment of not wanting a story to end however every character needs closure, needs for their story to be heard and mark the pages of history for that is their destiny. Lovely work.

All I can do is go awwwww. Did not expect the exchange of vows but it was such a sweet drop to the story. Marvelous jpb hun, all the way marvelous.

This chapter brought tears to my eyes, a sense of longing since my better half is currently away and so much pain and hope I did not think nor desire possible. It latched onto my soul and here I am at almost 11 pm wishing I could read it again because my heart aches for the words written. I don't want to push forward, I don't want the story to go on, I want Hiei and Aaron together and the boys going to rescue them. But alas here I push forward leaving a bit of my heart for you and clicking next for the next chapter although my head and heart are saying don't.

This caught me a bit off guard since I did not expect Kain to provide them with a moment of respire so it will be interesting to see how this plays out. Hiei is a difficult character so seeing him with his mate like this is very enlightening as opposed to other mate related stories in the fandom.

OMG, this has been such a heavy chapter, heavier than the previous one. It had the rawness of abandonment and feelings just crippled my heart.I would punch Kain in the gut right now if i could grrrrr.
Very good job.

Dun dun dun! Hiei must have a plan, he can't be offering himself up all for nothing

So let's take in from the top. From a swirl of emotion and wondering if they will make it came such a warm blessing that sweetens the soul with a joyful moment. Half expected them to seal the deal then amd there but where is the fun in that. Loved it