i think this story was perfect

I, for one loved this fanfiction and I wish it was longer. I would also like to point out to all those assholes that say it's stupid, that the author took his/her/both's time to make this and to stop being ungrateful.

That's so unlike Karou. Hehe... I'm not trying to be mean, but the personalities are pretty OOC.

Heck, I'm still enjoying it, though.

poor Kaoru I've had the same thing happen to me except with my older brother I broke my rib ..

I honestly loved this story and I like the ending words with how the days begin with a kiss and end with a kiss! Though I would have loved to have a more descriptive kiss, I know how hard it is to write lime or passionate kisses on things that people might see, and not just anyone but your family. ...and I still continue writing lime-ish kisses. Seriously, I can't just say and then so-so kissed so-so... No! XD seriously, i'm going to die if anyone finds it. I have a few fics I'm working on and will post when they are finished. Sorry for all that blabber! I won't he offended if you ignore it! It seriously is stupid (my blabber, not you). This story was very fun to read and I really admire how you replied to that rude anon. Though I hate how Kaoru jumped out of a window (because I love him :3) I'm glad everything turned out alright and beautiful!

This was MAGNFIQUE! I loved the moment when Hikaru said "I didn't peek...long" and how Kaoru blushed, like KYAAAAH!

I really loved this chapter! It was really interesting and I just loved it! I like the way they sleep too

wasnt what I expected, but it nevertheless was a fun read :) ty for making

Can not believe i did not see this story earlier. it looks very promising

I loved this story. It was so awesome and brilliant.

i love this story!

This was a good story and since I enjoyed it I have a few comments to make about the little A/N placed as the last chapter.

It would be because their bond runs so deep that Kaoru would react the way he did. They were so close (not "feeling each others emotions deep") and didn't get into fights like that which would cause Kaoru to freak and leave. He wouldn't understand why his brother had hit him and would probably think he was mad and didn't want him or something that would cause him to run away.

Once he finally got over it he'd want his brother to worry a little. In the anime it's obvious that the twins have a devious / vengeful streak in them and twin or not Kaoru would make Hikaru pay for that little slap.

Alright I think my complaining and commenting are over now. :D

Keep up the good work (even if you were 12 when you wrote it).

Yeah! You tell em! And you wrote this when you were twelve? Oh my god! You've got some real talent there, hang onto that!

No Kaoru! I was practically screaming at the screen in this chapter! And bless em kissing at the end :3 brill chapter!

The police are looking for him? Good grief! Great chapter!