When you said "Mock 7", do you mean "Mach 7"?

Great ending!

I love this!

I think it was very brave to include the concept of God in here. I like how you made him sound wise and not corny and over the top.

Great chapter, the pain concept is interesting.

Yay!

Alice!

ewww drinking oil, isn't that like drinking blood for humans, *ack!*

Quinn's father is alive.

O.O

Wow. This is a really good story, I'm so glad I found it. Quinn's powers are not dumb.

Soo that's Kendal not Alice and so Kendal is alive, why did Alice think her mom is dead. I like Quinn he's funny, it's kinda sad that he had to be stuck there?

That restrictuer plate thing is terrible, who would do that?

The ending was funny thought, with the SUVs, how does Jack know Doc?

Nooooooo!

Alice!

Just keep reading!

It's okay, A car embracing is like them nuzzling but they arn't rubbing against each other. Great chapter again. I understand now, but what about Jack, why does he have a gang?

Nice chapter. Her life sounds cruel, I like Alice.

This is a read page turner..or page clicker. That was so corny. Anway I can't stop reading this, I'm so glad it's complete. I wonder what Alice's powers were and why did Kendal find in Jack. Did Jack rape her or something?

She has amensia, poor little mustang.

My new favorite story!

Yaaaaaayyyyyy finished! :D *clap clap clap* That was an interesting read. You have a lot of talent and potential when it comes to supernatural powers and stuff like that. This was a unique idea and I enjoyed giving it a look. :D

Anyways, CC at the end in one nice little package, as promised:

-You can't rely on auto correct/automated spellcheck to find errors for you as the end all. That's honestly kinda the major letdown of this fic for me; there are a TON of words in the wrong tense and just wrong words, and as a reader it's really distracting. It's important to read your fic again by hand as the last thing when proofreading a story; reading it aloud is really helpful to avoid missing things like that too. I hope in future stories you put that into practice, because other than that your spelling and grammar are stellar and that's just the elephant in the room.

-I leave this fic still a bit confused on how exactly the death plates work. I get that when they use a gift it vitally hurts them, but I guess I'm still a bit mixed up on how that works. The way it's explained makes it sound like it's built to instantly cause a fatal wound, but there are characters in the story who only seem partly affected by the plate, or like the plate takes a while to make said wound. I'm just a little confused by the exact mechanics of that.

-I wish Alice had more flaws of her own, rather than just being surrounded by flawed circumstances. I wish she had some more notable personality flaws; I think that'd make her easier for the reader to connect to and more likable. TBH, when reading this fic, I wasn't as interested in Alice as the other characters around her and their circumstances; they felt more unique and less predictable than she was. I almost saw Alice as more of an object that helped move the story along than her own character with her own drive, if that makes any sense.

Anyways, I'm going to give this sequel a looksie. Happy writing! :D