Please continue! I need to know what happens next!

Great story. I want you to continue this. I want to see what happens next.

Okay, I'm interested. This is the first fanfic I have ever seen in a while whose premise alone made me interested enough to actually read it. I asked for an AU fanfic starring all of Organisation XI together, stirring in a romantic subplot and that's exactly what I got, but what I didn't expect was an AU that wasn't a high school fic, for once.

If I had to criticise the chapter- and I do, as a critic- I'd say that the story changes gears a bit too suddenly with the introduction scene of Xigbar. The paragraphs before Bigrax's scene were 2 to 3 lines in length, while almost all of the paragraphs in Xigbar's scene only have 1 line in them. The abscence of detail also seems a bit weird at first, but it's easy to visuallise a medieval forest, so I can't complain.

Update soon.