Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh boy.
Ed needs to come clean.. Fast.

This is very interesting. I am excited to see where you take this.

it was a really sexy chapter! looking forward to reading more son.

I will give a review of the whole story:

What I liked was that you took care of both sides after they had sex (again XD).
It was nice to know what was on their minds.
I'm really sad that it is over and I hope to find something different... like one-shorts or something.
These two have a nice chemical romance and what I like about your writing is your personal note of the characters without getting them out of their personality.

One thing:
If you're going to update this fanfic as well you can go more into detail about their feelings. You mentioned it that they're really short.
This is the only thing I would change (:

LOL Loved it !
Thnx for writing
:3

Adorably hot. x3

YAY~

Awww~

XD Yes, it is a good sign.

x3333

Omnomnomnom. XD These chapters make me make noises.

Smuttttt~ x3

333333 x3

I swear, I get the worst giggle fits every time I read the yaoi fics that are REALLY GOOD. This one had me covering my mouth so no one would come over and read. And why does this remind me of Animals by Nickelback? You made me laugh, you win.