| Reviews for Halloween |
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sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 9/3/2012 Haha. *skepticism* *skepticism* *what, candy?* "I'm in!" XD |
T13Doll chapter 1 . 11/19/2011 That is the greatest thing ever |
Flyer-2100 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010 "Candy?" "Free candy." "I'm in." Very nice! And I love how Edward just here's free candy and he's all over it! Though Alfons you sly dog, what are you going to do to our innocent little Edo? |
Naaailpaniter chapter 1 . 5/16/2010 Caandy รถ i want to.. XD Great Story xD |
killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 4/8/2010 funny. |
goldacharmed chapter 1 . 12/15/2009 Lol, okay that was funny. Loved the ending. Later dude. |
Yolen Yui chapter 1 . 11/18/2009 /Free/ Candy! :P |
Ashimattack chapter 1 . 11/11/2009 BAHAHHAHA loved it especially the last line good fic :) |
theluckyshipper chapter 1 . 10/27/2009 LOL! ahahaha! of course! who wouldnt think of that! ED loves sweet treats...(as long as they dont contain milk) XD |
merlyn1382 chapter 1 . 10/23/2009 still doesn't know what it is but as long as there free candy hes in |
GreedxEd chapter 1 . 10/23/2009 \o/, so cute, kat! ANd to The Real Gluttony: It's called the Fma movie where there are doubles of the people and ed's roommate's name is ALFONS, Honey. Alphonse is Ed's brother. Alfons is the one in our world. This is taking place in our world, which it does in the fma movie. SO think about that before you say something. It makes you look like you know nothing of Fma at all |
Feisty2Sin chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 honey, its not spelled alfons. its spelled alphonse |
Imgonenowgoodbye12345 chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 *wide grin* FINALLY, someone besides me who remembers the fact that holidays like Halloween and Christmas etc. don't exist in Amestris! I've gotten tired of seeing FMA Christmas fics set in Amestris because they don't have those days. It's nice to see a Halloween fic acknowledging this fact for once. It's well-written too. I didn't catch any grammar/spelling issues, and the characters are IC. "Free candy!" "I'm in." *grins* That said, it could use a little more detail. There was some good detail towards the beginning, but then towards the end it sort of went to almost pure dialogue, and it would be nice to actually see what's going on. |