Sorry to hear about your father. I understand how hard it is, my father died with Multiple Myeloma (Cancer). It's really hard watching your love ones slowly taken by a disease. I wish you luck.

Next chapter?

(SPOILER WARNING) I love this story, and you obviously put a great deal of effort into it - Please, Please finish it. I think you could probably give us a bare bones story and wrap it up in 3 or four chapters (though more would be nice). It's a good complicated story - I could have done without the imprints though (yucky!).

Haha nice this was a silly yet sweet chapter

Nice chapter, well written:-)

Hmm can't wait to read the rest of your story Hun it sounds perfect ... :-)

I love your story so much! I am so sorry about your Dad. My father passed in 2001. It still feels like it happened yesterday. I miss him so much. Time does heal but we never will forget. My sincere thoughts and prayers to you and your family. Hope that one day you will be able to finish writing your story. :)

Your trying so damn hard to keep them in character, that tthere's no growth. The are 2d. And boring even with the fight. This story is get worse chapter by chapter.

And what's with jacob?. Why even bother giving him access to bella in this situation?

You make no sense. Smh

If you wanted to write a new twist, then why write a twist that takes out the aggravatingly naive characters. Char Characters such as toolward, Jake the rapist, blind bella. And the same foolish non communication that frustrated reader with the original series.

You kept everything that sucked!

So I won't bother with the rest.

your bella is a child. She still allows everyone to treat her as a child. She's a woman about to get married but has a curfew. And is a knot allowed to sleep with her boyfriend slash fiance. What kind of b******* is this?your Bella needs to act like a grown up if you want to be treated like one.

okay I am 22 chapters deep and now I'm ready to get my first review. The only reason I'm 22 chapters deep is because your chapters are so small. But that does not take away from your story so there is some good news in that. Now as for your story I like it I like that devil Torihad to go to such lengths to get what they needed. Now I wonder what the tribe is going to say when Carlisle undoubtedly tell them that half of this family has been kidnapped Bella Jacob seems to be a complete when is he not.I also like that the wives have a little more say than they ever did in other stories, they seem like they actually have a personality here. I like the fact that arrows wife took control the way she did. But it looks like you kept Edward true 2 character, he still doesn't see the obvious choice he needs to make which is to change Bella and just call it a me Edward is just as big of an a****** as Jacob. This Bella doesn't even have a choice or say in a relationship. She just gets dragged alonghas Edward make decisions for both of them. That doesn't sound like a relationship to me not a good one anyway.

My prayers to you and your family, and I wish that you soon will be able to remember all the good times with your father.

Sweetie, I finally catch up with the story, I can't wait to read what's to come. You know you'll always have our support. It was a pleasure meeting you and I'm glad you didn't come to NY with me so you could have more time with your dad. Like Cathy says: "Everything happens for a reason"

Hi Chase, Im sorry for your loss. We understand and take all the time you need. Well be here when you are ready. Take care.

*hugs* You take the time you need.

I am so sorry for your loss, but at least your Dad is now at peace. Your mother and family are far more important than any fanfic story. Take care of yourself and your family. The thread of the story will be there when the time is right for you to start writing again.