Nicely told.

This was so cute!_

this reminded me of Blind Lovers mikayuu on Wattpad.
I absolutely loved every second of it.
the song was amazing too.

Wow, I'm always amazed at the psychological depth of these characters and this story, especially for the light hearted tone it is written in.

Okay. First of all, let me say I LOVE the story.
I enjoyed the world you put the characters in. Along with that the plot was unique and interesting which kept the story moving forward, yet it stayed away from the mistakes most romance stories do in that the characters don't keep making stupid mistakes leading to too much drama. It's light, heartwarming and dare I say it I almost cried when I found out why Merlin was blind. The characters were well fleshed out and the romance between the characters was so pure and innocent to the point where appearance and disabilities don't even matter anymore; this doesn't happen much in media nowadays.
Thanks for sharing the story with us and I hope you keep making more.
Good luck!
-Megajoule

I really loved your story! I loved your characterizations. I do have one question, and maybe I missed the explanation, but i'm confused as to why Merlin's father left? How was he a danger to his own son? Other than that confusion I really enjoyed reading your writing.

I loved your plot! It was excellent and I love how you express how your characters feel during dialogue! It was truly wonderful and I am a very picky reader. The only bit that bugged me were spelling errors, but I am a spelling nutcase, which is why one of my friends doesn't let me read her rough drafts, etc., unless I don't have a writing utensil of any kind.. But you were great!

Ahhh that was so beautiful! Thank you for writing such a magnificent piece

Oh my god I love this story so much. Usually when I read stories, there is always one or two things that I dislike and just have to skim to get past it. But not with this one! I loved it every bit of the way so far. Arthur's transformation is absolutely phenomenal and beautiful

Oh my god, the start contrast in Arthur's personality when he's with Merlin and not is enough to give a girl whiplash. But I love it all the more!

I loved the story. Definitely on my top 20 list for Merlin fics.
You wrote about Merlin's blindness brilliantly. I know because I'm not quite blind but visually impaired and one of my best friends is blind.
And the story's name was very good.

Sorry for any writing mistakes. I'm from finland and can read well but not write.

Thanks for sharing.

Ooh! I loved this story so much!
Squeeeee
The ending was so fluffy and cheesy and romantic! Absolutely prefect!

I seriously can't stop squealing over how cute they are together! I love it!

Oh my
That was just so awesome!