Such A GREAT STORY! such a shame you didn't end it... I Love it!

I'm so happy this is still going. Great chapter. I'm excited for the next.

Update! Please?

The only thing I would change in this chapter is when Marik calls Ishizu nii-sama. It's should be nee-sama which means sister. (Nii-sama means brother)

Shadow- awww that is so cute!
Isy- when you firt mentioned feet, Iwas thinking that those things were going into someones mouth... That really grosses me out, but what you did was adorable
Shadow- I like this quick look into their past
Isy- great chaptet

I didn't think you'd update again!

Actually, I AM really weirded out by feet. But I read it anyways. And I didn't get really grossed out until the end...then I was like "Ewww" along with Marik. LOL I'll forgive it if you let Marik top Bakura in some future chapter...seriously...please, please, please make that happen?

So I adored chapter 18 (?) the other one in bakura's POV, it was incredibly insightful and I loved your metaphor of a motorcycle ride. This one just depressed me. :( Bakura don't go back! I hope you are still continuing this story!

Aww. Bakura is crying.

Please update. I love this fanfic

Yay! I love this story so much, absolutely loved this new chapter too. It's always great to get a look into Bakura's head, but man I hate Pegasus! Why can't people just let them be happy?

Wanted to say thanks so much for sharing this awesomeness. I can't wait to see where you take this, even if it does take a year. I will wait for you forever. ;)

Oh my god please i must know what happen to our Bakura i cantstand the fact he going threw so much pain and i just want ot slap theshit out of pegaguse that jerk i cired when Marik aked bakura to marry him. this stoy amzing and i cant wait to know what happens next

I'm confused...why did Bakura have to do the whole, "Leave the Ishtars out of it, I want no contact with them" thing? I think maybe he's doing it to protect Marik in some way, but protect him from what? And why would Pegasus even need convincing to keep Marik away from Bakura? Wasn't Pegasus's threat in the first place that he wasn't going to let Bakura see Marik?

The story is still alive! Eeeeee! I'm so happy! And Pegasus DOES have the millennium eye! What? This changes the tone entirely! Oh poor Marik, first having to fire Joey (although I still can't figure why... Marik wasn't going to be fired, he was just warned), then Bakura ends up in the hospital, and now it turns out Pegasus really is that evil! Gah!

I hope the next chapter comes soon. This story DEMANDS completion!

I couldn't stop readin this fanfic. I finished the whole 19 chapters in one day. I love it! And i can feel every character's emotions thanks to your writing.

You are good at this. Please update soon :)

OMG I love this story :D

I hope you're continuing some day...it would be a pity to abandon this...

and this story should have more reviews!

NICE i love the

and the last line

"Nothing, huh?" I smiled, basking in the glow of these flames I'd set. "Well, that's just a little more than what you're worth to me."

but I am a little confuse on how the millennium Items come in and all that

I mean so they're not real and its just in Bakura's head?

bottom line is I'm confuse and and I want you to update soon

OK well laters