Oh my! I love this!

Great chapter! very well written from Jane's point of view.

This feels like it needs one more chapter to complete it. Ah well.

cool

make more this was amazing man or woman

How is it a crack pairing if they are not actually together? What a waste of time.

Awesome!

it's been years... a damn shame. I have enjoyed the two chapters read.

I really wish that you would make a continuation to this!
This is seriously an amazing fic!

God! I love this story. You made me love this pairing! You did a great job on jane. Please please please. Make either more to this wonderful story. Or at the very least make more stories of this pairing.

Sorry I didnt log into my account. (Im lazy lol.)

I know I'm a bit late but pleeeaase update? However, I do understand if you're done with the story. But still... Lol

The way that you write Jane's point of view is abosolutely marvelous. I can see and even feel her possessiveness towards Bella Cullen. It is magnificent and unique. You should keep writing. Maybe one day from now you'll have a great and peculiar story like Ms. Meyers. I am counting on you on publishing a novel. You have great potential in you. I hope to see your name and novel on top of a bookshelf.

Sincerely,
Jamille Yomtown

I thought this was well done. There were a lot of grammar errors, but they were insignificant. It also felt like some of the flow was forced in the second chapter, but other than that, I really enjoyed this fic. And the pairing actually really worked.

i love very very much this chapter :) great job :)

Awesome i love Bella/Jane pairing :)