Okay I have a message for the person her write this... I JUST LOVE THIS STORY it's so AWSOME & I can't wait to read the next story I just wished that this story can be in a movie too that would be so AWSOME but just saying I just this story keep it up

Oh jeez, those last five paragraphs were enough to make me grin like the little fanboy that I am. I'm not sure what this series will bring yet, but I can happily say that I'm liking it so far. I hope this continues to keep me entertained!

I have a feeling that the first section of this chapter was really emotional because it's a reunion, but of course it just flew right over my head :P
Sounds sweet enough though.

Ha! Questions about sexual tension. Always a good time :)

Aww, he gave her a flower. Wish someone would give me a flower, goddammit.

Are these like monster Pokemon? Or monster monsters?
Are there any real animals in the Pokemon world? I've always wondered that.

Aw snap! Pokemon version of Rapture! I love it!

I swear to God, I kept thinking "Wow, Absol and Glaceon are REALLY weird names for characters." Then I remembered Pokemon were in this story and I had to slap myself.
I like the battle scene. I always have such difficulties with fight scenes. I always got too much going on at one time. Yours was nice and easy to follow.

Are most of these chapter names based off songs? Because whenever I see "Smoke and Mirrors" I think about this Lifehouse song I have on my iPod.

Drama bomb!
I feel a little bad that I can't leave more profound sounding reviews other than ones commenting your style of story structure.
As far as I can tell though, the characters seem cool.

Aw snap! A blast from the past!
I'm not really sure what's going on since I'm not into Pokemon, but your writing style is fantastic, Broski.

*squeals excitedly* aw yeah!

I can barely type a review... Harley...

Oh my goodness! Harley almost made me cry... :(

But great chapter... Oh I can't stay happy, but this is amazing :)

Go Ellis! :) I am stunned with this amazing piece of story! XD

Oh wow. This was even better turban what I thought! The twist is huge!

Harley, no! I was sooooo sad! Please... This story is amazing... I am speechless...

Wait... I was starting to like Verdana...

Wow! Plot twist! Though I think it would have been more interesting to have her turn Drew against the others! But I know the rest is going to be amazing!

Wow, just wow... :D

I love this! Especially Harley's character! :) The inner Harley!

By the way, Roses do not work like that either! XD

Wow! Intense! It really got my adrenaline pumping! Your chapters are short and sweet! I like it like that! But not too short. I should actually say perfect! XD

Awwww! My friend says I smell like vanilla, in the least romantic way...

But after my randomness comes the usual note of how awesome you are! You nailed the romance scene and especially the forgiveness one! :) Keep it up!