Glad Sweeney was there in time! Poor Mrs L

That last sentence is the saddest

I feel so bad for Nellie. I wonder how long it'll take for Mr T to find out what happened and whatnhe'llndo about it.
The judge has some nerve to show up at the pie ship. Nellie should hit him onnthe head with her rolling pin and be done with it

I love this story with all of my soul.

Screw you Judge Turpin indeed! DIE! -coughcough- Okay then... I like this story a lot! Except for the fact that Toby died...but...well, it's still good.

It's a beautiful FanFic. I enjoyed reading it.

I'm so smiley now (if that's even a word). It's sad that Toby died, but I'm so happy the Judge died too and that there's Toddett now, whoopie. I was clapping throught the entire ending, I'll admit it, until Toby died at least. :( Great story, I loved it! Amazing job.

wouldnt the guys hav noticed the judge when they came for toby?

no! he's dead! NEVR!

oh well, what they gonna do about 'im then?

lol

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update soon!XD

omg! don't kill mrs. lovett! I have never h8 the judge so much. a small idea, why not let mrs. lovett kill the judge instead of sweeney? plz write the next chapter soon!

I loved it!Can't wait to read more.:)

im sorry but i just had this vision of a limp dangliging toby, and those words "Mum, help" bahahah! they made me laff.

not your writing, its my imagination. a scary place no one should ever encounter.

next chappy soon plz!

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i reckon that that chapter would have been better if was continous on thelast. if that makes sense.

but all in all. i loved it ! Keep going!

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i would have liked it to be longer...:( but anywho?

just one thing: his nellie?

so sad, longer gooder!

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a pie? or a pie lady...?

sweet ending to the chap. poor sweeney i doubt he'll get his chance yet...:(

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awesome!

well, not awesome for nellie.

take a second? BAHA! the judge must suck! lol

loved it!

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