Honest to God she was such a cock tease. I got upset on behalf of draco. I'm not a patient person lol.

Honest to God I'm a girl and she is giving me blue balls

I have to stop and comment here. I decided to stop reading this story at chapter 11. While I admit, I liked a lot of the storyline. It had humor and fresh ideas about hogwart and its students and the author is a talented writer, but for me I was finding the writing content objectionable. I have to say I am no prude, and regularly read and thoughly enjoy lemons in my stories. That said; I found this authors take on Hermiones thought process and actions very juvenile and somewhat disturbing. I’m all for AU and Non/cannon pressing the boundaries of characters, but for a character we all know and love as a Know -it-all and mature acting person it was hard to reconcile. Her confusion of normal, consensual sexual dynamics between two people and possible forcible sexual harassment and rape was concerning. As was Hermione jumping to conclusions in chapter 11, that if the Kyle character had raped Hermione that Draco would say that it was her fault and that she deserved it and was “asking for it”. I found this offensive and unrealistic for the story line. I want to say that maybe the author would benefit from a beta to betttr aid her storyline and plot. There was true talent here, I hope this review is taken in a good way as it was not meant as a discouragement.

I know it's long past but imagining not having had Alcohol until my 21st birthday is impossible! I only turned 21 this September (now it's December 2018)and (being German) have been allowed to buy and drink anything for 3 years and buy Alcohol fermentation products (beer and wine) for 5 years (not that that was a challenge prior). Guardians can allow you to consume alcohol as early as they like and aren't likely to be deemed irresponsible for it! Having had rum flavour in cake was mostly rum and occasional flavour extract, having stew at my grandparents was having wine and some food, having stale Bier around made finding apple juice difficult and sipping of my mums wine was an amazing way to train my pallet.

As for Alcohol to start with I'd recommend long drinks (anything fruit or syrup heavy , low limits 1 or 2 a night (if you are a light weight like me), Jack Daniels-Cola is quite flexible to your tastes, milk and cream make it go down even smoother and Meet is just amazing wine can be mild and fruity
but might be an acquired taste, similar things about beer.

Okay. I have feelings about this story. Good and bad. First of all I cant for the life of me remember why I decided to continue to finish reading this story because this story made me angry and frustrated and not in a good way. This dragged on soooo bad, I wanted to bash my phone to the wall. You wrote Hermione like a 12 year old. She was so damn naïve, clueless and couldn’t Make a decision to safe her live, which is funny since she is a freakin war hero where she basically made all the decisions. Draco and Hermione were supposed to be grown ups in the story, and writing them this way didn’t make any sense to me, especially since you also wrote the stories of the children, which went much more mature.

I’m not saying its all bad, because you write in such a way I didn’t want to stop reading, you made me laugh and scream and thats defenitely a good thing. But please next time get a beta! They puck up your grammar mistakes and can guide you with your writing. I know that when you are writing it’s difficult to see the grammar mistakes because you’ve Been staring at the text for such a long time, but mistakes with your and you’re shouldnt be made so frequently.

Thank you for writing this! It was a fun read, although a little frustrating at times... Hermione was just SOoOOoo clueless (which I know was your intention, but I feel like it dragged a little- specially while they were at camp). Overall I liked your Draco and the extra characters were endearing and funny !

if only Draco and Hermione were like Damien and Danielle

This was such a lovely read. I really enjoyed your Hermione and Draco.

I really liked this story, although Hermione is daft! She was so clueless (although, I'm clueless when it comes to boys liking me too. I wouldn't have picked up on that.) If they had just said what they were thinking or asked direct questions, then they could've gotten together by the fourth chapter. Anyways, really good story and I loved every single part of it.

I really love this one！

I want to strangle your Hermione by this point. She's an idiot. Like, Hermione is not dense, but understood, she needed to be for your plot to work. But I don't even like her anymore. She's so wishy washy, no back bone, no cleverness. You had a lot of fun and unique ideas in here, but i just can't handle the stupidity. Also the nonconsensual situations that got pushed and seemingly promoted in the beginning were unnecessary and frustrating. For God's sake, she's an adult, Hermione wouldn't

Reality vs Draco Vision was hilarious! I've never read anything like that before in any fic. Kudos!

Hmmmm not sure how I feel having Hermione's drink being spiked. Then again, I guess if it wasn't she may have never confessed to Draco. Catch 22 I guess :)

Hahaha poor Blaise he just crashed and burned! Great chapter! One quick question: how was Hermione able to apparate without her wand?

I think it's Draco's fault. Instead of playing games he should have been upfront with her and told her he liked her. But then he had to go and make up some girl with giving her a different name. That scene where Hermione asks him questions about Rebecca, and he didn't falter in answering, was what made everything worse. He should have come clean at that point and Hermione would have probably confessed about her budding feelings for him as well.

Harry and Blaise are hilarious! Such a funny scene, loved it!