Reviews for Reflections
Guest chapter 4 . 1/12/2013
Really good story, as are all of yours. Hope you continue to write in this 'ship.
AlpineHolly chapter 4 . 5/15/2012
This was great fic, not really sure what I expected when I started reading, but had me on edge for little Jack, I fully expected that the Reaper had killed Haley at that point, although I was okay with the take on how this all turned out for her. Aside from the end and her realisation there was very little on the impact this had on her and on her reaction to Jack's attack, although that said, the story centered more around Hotch and his reaction to finding Jack attacked and hurt by the Reaper and his choice to take care of his son with disregard for anyone or anything else so I was okay with the flow overall.

The only bit that didn't quite sit right with me was the team leaving Hotch in the hospital by himself while he waited for his son to come out of surgery, I somehow felt that the team would have or should have stood by him during this vigil especially on the chance of a not so positive outcome and being there to support him through the uncertainty. My two cents!

Loved the end and overall very nicely done, nice work.
Kimmeke chapter 4 . 1/30/2011
Great, heartbreaking fic! Great job!
DraejonSoul chapter 4 . 10/10/2010
I wanna applaud you for doing this bit. I know that you must have made a very, very decision in writing this. Though you left the details out, I'm still glad you didn't give us the details of Jack's... torture. I'm also willing to ignore the question of why Foyet left Haley almost untouched (maybe he was going to after dealing with father & son, thought the son will make more of an impact on Hotch than his ex-wife, etc...), because I don't think a lot of us readers won't stand the violence being done to Hotch's sweet little kid. So thanks for sparing us from that.

You were able to convey Haley's realization at the end quite nicely. A more stretched out little flashback would have been nice, but I'm not really complaining. An AU-ish sequel on how that plays out would be nice, but that's up to you, of course.

Thanks for writing this! _
Indigo1100 chapter 4 . 9/30/2010
Nice story! Kidnapping and sadistic choices and a very good choice on when in the story to start and so heartbreaking and so heartwarming. And I like the discussion of the possibility of killing- it's very interesting to think about, considering the canon. Thanks!
roxypony chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
IF ONLY it ended like that... Im not a Haley fan either but she didnt have to die.. :(

GREAT story, beautiful work.

*Roxxy,
A Black Queen chapter 4 . 3/25/2010
Really lovely fic :)

I'm very happe, Jack and Hotch will be fine and together and Haley finally understand Hotch and his job.

I love how you writen Hotch, really great work.
A Black Queen chapter 3 . 3/25/2010
Great Chapter :)
A Black Queen chapter 2 . 3/25/2010
Aw, this so sad, I really hope Jack will be ok.

But I have to say this. I'm gland Hotch catch Foyet :)
A Black Queen chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Amazing start :)

I love Hotch/Rossi friendship.
WriterJC chapter 4 . 11/1/2009
Great story yet again! I really love the way you write Hotch - just spot on. I liked that you allowed Haley to appreciate Aaron for who he is and what he does. Looking forward to your next story. :) Fantastic job.
jeannieann chapter 4 . 10/26/2009
Short, sweet and brill! Can but agree and second reviewers' comments. Waiting impatiently for next story:)
SignedSealedWritten chapter 4 . 10/26/2009
I loved this chapter, Brummie! It nearly made me cry. I could see everything so clearly. I absolutly loved this story.

You need to write more stories. Or else I'm going to sit here and pout until you do. And constantly refresh your page until I see a new one.
Thn0715 chapter 4 . 10/25/2009
Excellent! I loved that scene with Hotch trying to explain everything to an unconscious Jack, and then snuggling up with him. That was wonderful. Loved it!
nexis44 chapter 4 . 10/25/2009
So loved this story. glad you didn't get them back together. glad to see your work and can not wait for more:o)
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