I know that this is a long shot, however I would really appreciate it if you could continue this story. It is soooo wonderful. I would like to know what happens.

Please finish the story. it needs to be finished. I don't think much of a writer who leaves an unfinished story. this will be the first and last story I will read of yours.

It's been a while since I read this story and I was hoping you had finished it. It's a good story and I would love to have a happy ending. Please find the time to finish.

Thanks for wasting my time with an abandoned story. Shame too, this is pretty good. I really wanted more of it.

my chest hurts u left me on the biggest cliffhanger

It's been three years since last uodate. Please come back and continue this. I gotta know how it ends.

Oh great, leave it at a cliffhanger?

more please

I know it's been a while since you have updated, but this is wonderful! I just recently discovered CM & pen & Derek, so I'm slow on finding fanfics. But I really hope you'll pick back up on this! BTW, this is great & really impressive as it was your first one to write:-)

I KNEW I shouldn't have read this! Its. So. God. Damn. Good! And you haven't updated in TWO YEARS. I'm so mad at you! Such a good story!

Please update. This is a great story

I would love to this updated and completed

Please, pretty please up date. What happens next? YOu just can't let a great story like this die a slow painful death in fanfiction limbo.

When are you going to update this great story?

Are you updating?