Reviews for At Fault
Nicky Eira chapter 27 . 9/1/2010
It was fitting that Yamamoto had the last word; it actually made me raise my eyebrows, because two days ago I planned for Yamamoto to have the last chapter in a little drabble set I'm writing P you know what they say, great minds think alike lol, just kidding..

Loved the entire set, I'm glad to have favorited this thing D

Keep writing- hope to hear more from you soon.

-Nicky
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 27 . 8/31/2010
This was a great conclusion to the series. I think you really captured Yamamoto well, and he's a really hard character to write at times. Lovely work as always.

Kit~_
Nicky Eira chapter 26 . 7/19/2010
I thought this was really well written; i like Soi Fon's character a lot, too. You've really got her peeled inside out and laid flat to see in this one. Well done )
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 26 . 7/18/2010
This was really impressive. Soi Fon's complexities make her a hard character to write, and you've really captured her well in this piece. Lovely work as always.

Kit~_
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 25 . 7/16/2010
This was great. You did a really nice job of keeping Izuru from being too whiny which is often how his character is written. Great work as always.

Kit~_
Nicky Eira chapter 22 . 4/30/2010
Ah, I'm glad I reminded you of your excellent writing, it gave us another good chapter )
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 24 . 4/22/2010
I really liked this one. I especially liked the way you delved into her dangerous side as well as her role as healer. People often forget that those who put you back together know how to take you apart. Lovely work as always.

Kit~_
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 23 . 4/20/2010
You've done such a wonderful job of creating a really capturing a Momo that is both sympathetic and much stronger and more fleshed out than many people. There is a tendency to portray her in an unflattering light, but you've created a wonderful character sketch of her. Lovely work as always.

Kit~_
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 22 . 4/19/2010
This is great. I love how you got under Renji's surface layer. There's a lot more to his character than we normally see, and you captured that well. Great work as always.

Kit~_
Nicky Eira chapter 21 . 3/10/2010
What do I say?... Wow. Just. Wow.

I have no words for your boundless imagination and amazing writings... I applaud your effort of getting into the shoes of each character so well. I could never imagine how each character could blame themselves, so hats off to you
MissTeak chapter 21 . 1/23/2010
Byakuya and Sesshoumaru! *fangirl squealing* I totally agree with you; the two of them are practically the same. And guess what? I actually gave Byakuya a little cameo in my Sesshoumaru/Kagome fic, "The Third Parties". You can check it out if you want, it's in chapter 15 :) I intend to make him appear again in the story;)

OK, back to your drabble. Well done as usual, I think you captured Byakuya well and it is no mean feat. Anyone who has watched Bleach and bothered to think about it would know how complex and deep Byakuya's character is. I will be looking forward to reading more of your works - I seem to like just about everything you write. :)
Aosugiru Sora chapter 21 . 1/21/2010
Byakuya really is quite the complex character and I think you displyed that well throughout the course of the passage. A man caught in between the struggles of duty and heart. You showed off his personality very well, and I commend you for that. Keep up the awesome work. :)

Sora
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 21 . 1/20/2010
This was great. I agree that Sesshomaru and Byakuya meeting would be interesting. They do have much in common. I think you really captured a number of Byakuya's facets in this. Great work as always.

Kit~_
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 20 . 1/19/2010
I liked this. You've done a really good job of exploring a lot of the minor characters in this fic, and you constantly do a great job at it. I love the new perspectives you keep bring out. Lovely work as always.

Kit~_
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 19 . 1/15/2010
I liked this. Admittedly, I've never really thought that much about Komamura's point of view, but this really seemed to fit him. Great work as always.

Kit~_
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