Great for a one shot. It kept my attention but didn't give too much away. Love the Eliot/Parker pairing as well as the fact that it still involved the team in an interesting con. Thanks for a good read :)

Lol I laughed so hard!

lol. nice.

Fantastic

Your grammar here was fine. It was a real good fic too. :)

Great story! I really liked it!

You certainly have a flair for descriptive accuracy, for one who's never visited a strip club before!

"The man has an unholy affection for his coat!" Again, you've got the character dialog down cold. I do like your writing.

ooooh...yeah...!

Loved this.

I thought you did a great job of adding sex appeal without going to crazy with it. It was very amusing all the things that Parker was doing. Great idea for a story.

I'm the same way. I can't write scenes like that without blushing...but I can read them. Loved this one though.

I really enjoyed this! Parker is just so business-like and matter-of-fact I can see her strutting right across the club (maybe reminding herself not to stab him if he puts his hands on her) and then right back over when she was done like she'd just gone and ordered something off the value menu. Ha! Fabulous, fabulous. I'm glad you added E/P to your repertoire 3

I love Parker's reasoning, I bet people are more interested in her being nearly naked than what she's stealing from them :) Great job!

This was hilarious! And absolutely brillaint - great work!

that was great loved it