I really LOVE the insight into the Kinderheim arc. I don't know if you plan to continue this, but please, please, please do. The world needs to know more about the terrible stuff that goes on in that hell hole...!

I know another user already commented on this, but I'll say it again: Johan's reactions are SPOT-ON. This is one of the first stories I'd read before I got an account on this site, and I've come back to it every once in a while :D

Hartman's reactions are interesting too, but I honestly never got the pedophile vibe from him even in the manga and anime. He just seemed to enjoy beatings, but that's all (in my opinion, of course!). There are a few typos here and there, but not so much so that the story is unreadable! :D

Nice story idea! I especially liked the beginning part.

I loved this, there's not much to say except that the characterization is really spot on IMO. I can imagine something like this happen, especially Johan's dialogue, my favorite bit is probably the end with his line about Evil and Hartmann smashing the glass. I guess I love the content most of all (the deduction that he would like Johan to dominate him etc), it just all makes sense. x3

I love it even as a kid, Johan still mindscrewed the lot of people.

Shota warning set off my alarms, since I thought it was going to be rape for a minute (yes I read T fics with lemons,) but it was only implied.

*shrugs* It was decent above all.

Awesomeness! XDD

Deep down, I was hoping they could finished off the chess game! It's too bad it was left halfway like that. Poor Hartmann, he wouldnt have a chance to begin with! I enjoyed reading the interaction between them, I was quite surprised how Johan knew about the whole submissive/dominance issue. Again, thanks for posting this fic! I'm off giving review for your next work *Ciou! *wave*wave*

Wow. That was impressive. All the tension going off from both characters, and the delicious way in which Johan played Hartmann, and Johan's complete superiority and condescendension...damn, this ended up being hot, which is slightly disturbing. Well worthy of Johan, I guessXD

The tension between them was so think I could almost touch it and not just feel it.

No, in fact, all the tension was on one man's shoulders: Hartmann.

It was like an invisible barrier between the characters. and when Hartmann tried to go throught it, he felt like loosing and being humiliated.

I love your genious!

Hahah Hartmann. Goog going young Johan.

whoa! The fic is so amazing!I so love it~3 Please make another Monster fic! :3

wow Hartman is such a pervert...

but honestly this story is amazing. It's like a scene from a movie, with the vivid descriptions and delicious tension you created. I liked the part with Johan smiling warmly when his beloved sister was mentioned...contrasting with the cold, amused smile he gives to his victims. The end was brlliant too, Hartman being so turned on and pissed off at the same time. Seriously loving this. I hate rushing writers, but in your case I can't help it! Your Monster fanfics are incredible. Are you going to continue the Kinderheim series or something else? Great job. :D

Had really hard time remembering who Hartmann is ' But that's not what I wanted to say. I wanted to thank you greatly for another amazing fic. Even though I have really hard time believing anyone from Kinderheim actually dared to do smth like this to Johan, you captured his personality very well. And I definitely would've enjoyed seeing him being fucked. The way you repeat the lines about how he's meant to dominate throughout the fic just begs for it :D Amazing. Thank you and I hope you'll write more.

Wow...that's all what I can say...

the story left me again in the world of monster! You can so hardly affect the reader with such words! I felt again the power of Johan yes really with your discription I wanted to fuck him XD...you're really good I'm realy glad to inderstand such good fic ( you now I'll say it again: I realy DO NOT inderstant english BUT BUT BUT I CAN'T STAY WITHOUT YOUR FANFICTION! ) Well it's quite good job! thanks!

Well no wonder Johan is so fxcked up he's surrounded by pedophiles! Ah well I still like this.

This is a wonderful, twisted story of extreme intelligence. I admire your courage in deciding to write about Kinderheim and it's horrors. Managing to describe the raw perversity and the cruelty of the experiment, as well as the psyche of such difficult characters and their mind games, is something that maybe only you can do properly. You understand *so* much the core of Monster that it's actually scary; it's almost like reading something from Naoki himself. Oh, and I'll send the real, long review by PM in a day or two 'cause adapting everything in english it's killing me XD. Thank you for keep writing, and for giving us such a terrific time!