Reviews for Inevitable Reality
Sarah chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Hello!
This story is perfect! My favourite from ALL shool AU's.
I'm a bit sad that it's just that short, but still a VERY good work of yours.
Congratulations! :)
(Sorry, if there are any grammar problems, I just started lerning English)
L0veinchaos chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
Cute story, Mordred's my favorite.
TriCladdagh chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Ok I while I loved the story I feel that you left out a lot of unanswered questions:
1) What is the role of the "knights"?
2) I understand that Hunith and Uther knew each other in the past but how and why did Hunith leave so long ago? It almost seems that there might have been a relationship between them due to Uther's reaction to her name and the way they reacted to each other when Merlin was in the hospital...
3) Does Uther now know of Arthur's sexuality? And is he ok with him and Merlin being together?

Again I want to restate that I did enjoy the story; however, I just think you could have added so much more in the way of details to help the reading to understand more
Elmen'sDaughter chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
I love your addition of Mordred, as well as Morgana's no nonsense attitude. The way you incorporated both the main issues and social boundaries (druids, knights, anti-magic attitudes) into modern day made the story really fun to read.
PurpleSong chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Please, PLEASE continue the fanfic! m(._.)m :3
zechirator chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Adorable story! I'm kind of confused about the knights, what exactly are they? But I guess it's not vital to my understanding of the cuteness of the Merthur relationship. :)
Princess Falling Star chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
I generally have trouble liking modern AU but i really enjoyed this, the conflict as well as society that you invented for it.
RainIsMyFavouriteColour chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
i really liked it

kind has a bit of a fluffy appeal and lighthearted
mysticmoon1331 chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
great story! i really enjoyed it. one issue i had with it though was the line 'It was the look of a cornered animal, one that wanted more than nothing than to flee.' i had to read it a few times to understand what you were trying to say. personally i think i might make a bit more sense if you changed 'nothing than' to 'anything' so it instead read 'It was the look of a cornered animal, one that wanted more than anything to flee.' i just think that might make more sense, but thats just me. thank you for taking the time to read this review and write this story.
darkmousey chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
This was a really well-done oneshot! I admit, I've actually opened it a few times, but never got around to reading it before I ventured off to another fandom, but I'm glad I finally read it. I found the whole druid/knight thing really interesting; at times while I was reading I kind of wished that there was more background on the issue, but on the other hand, I liked how there wasn't a huge explanation-it wasn't an omniscient narration, but just jumped into the story line and lets the reader figure it out. Anyways, I enjoyed this, and I'll definitely put it on my re-read list.
DorianPink chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
It's brilliant! Love it!
NykSkyBlue chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
This was bloody brilliant!'

I really like this twist in this Modern Merline fic!

I was really good, so good infact I would read a sequel!

I really hope you do write a sequel to it!
CrayonsPink chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
This was AMAZING! I loved it. :) Bravo!
byebyebyeeeeeeeee chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
I laughed so hard at the Modred parts! Great fic:D
FoxGlade chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Excellent twist on the normal Modern AU. Just brilliant.
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