Really good

I just realized something. If Edward had sex with her then, they wouldn't be alone the next few nights for her to try and get him to do it again after he hurt her. So if he had he probably wouldn't have sex with her as a human after that first time.

You do so well with this! Im sure Stephenie Meyer would be proud :D

hi

wats good

k bye

*punches Jacob*
Team Jacob is no place to be.

I know this has been out for a while but I just got here so I hope it's not too late to leave a review.
I have read the original series quite a few times and I can never get enough. My favourite, however was Midnight Sun.
There's something that's just more fascinating seeing the book from Edward's POV. I am so excited about your version of Eclipse.

You've managed to capture Edward's essence.. His kindness, vulnerability, his soul and everything in between. You've also given us a deeper insight to his inner demons and his torment where the Bella/Jacob dilema is concerned.

To see everyone else through his mind is also quite fascinating. I've always thought it makes for a richer, more well-rounded story. I'm absolutely loving your piv of Edward's POV.

Your writing in itself is beautiful. Evocative. Visceral. I'm really ecstatic that I got here and I will remain, forever, a fan.

THANK YOU!

Seriously you are incredible. I'm reading this and Eclipse at the same time and it reads so perfectly. I feel like you really capture Edward and write how he really would be. I like all the scenes without Bella, those really show your creativity. Keep writing, you're magical!

Alice already sees the volturri coming...yet Edward is pushing Bella to wait...is he trying to get them all fucking killed? Is he that stupid? I'm pretty sure Canis said we don't give second chances! I'm surprised Bella hasn't said anything about that

This is great

This is great

Loved moonless night and I can tell this is gonna be a good one too

Love it! You do such a stellar job with relating Edwards thoughts and feelings accurately. I believe his character whole heartedly. I love his freak out at the end.

Oh no I hope he gets better soon

I've seen a definite improvement in your work from Moonless Night to Eternal Equinox and I'm absolutely thrilled! I can't wait to continue on the journey of this fic and on to the next one. You've given me something to look forward to reading to fill the blank-ness that comes between finishing one book and forlornly looking for another to fill the gap. Thanks for another great chapter! :D

Really loved this chapter!