wish it were longer, but nicely done!

Aw, you can't end it there! Please continue! Ranma's reaction needs to be shown, and Shampoo and Ukyo need consequences.

Great descriptions and suspense.

If you won't finish...may I have permission to do so someday?

nice oneshot.

well this was nice maybe you should keep going? id like to see waht else you can do with this story

Ok This is pretty good,but it needs to be longer! :/ Why not change it into a longer story? Please?

Ooh, I'd hate to be those two when Ranma finds out they tried to off Akane... An interesting idea and rather sweet. I liked.

Good little oneshot here. _ I found it kinda sad and a little touching. Good job.

good story, ranma should go bullistic and beat the shit out of ukyo and shampoo.

Hi! Oh this was the sweetest story... I almost hope you could continue it, but it's really perfect as it is. You write very well.

i think you should continue with this fic and continue with this them of never giving up. it was definitely a very good story of the tensions between akane, ukyo, shampoo, and ranma. in either case i hope you continue writing. laterz

nice one!.,

hope you make more!.,

x crusincloud x

Aww, that was so sweet. _ For a while there, I thought he wouldn't come.

You wrote an amazing description of drowning. I almost felt like I was alongside her, also drowning. The realism in the text was incredible.

Nice job.

ravengal out x

Really short... but otherwise... TOTALLY AWESOME! Hope you make another one soon... with Ranma and Akane possibly in swimsuits... and alone.