Reviews for Becoming Bella Swan
Guest chapter 3 . 4/28
It's spelled WHOA not WOAH. (Look it up if you don't believe me.)
Guest chapter 53 . 9/25/2019
This story was so confusing yet amazing at the same time. Dark humor, extremely crack-fic at times with some meaningful deep moments thrown in. A well-written awesome story. Great work and thank you for sharing it with us.
Tan chapter 51 . 5/31/2019
This better be the conclusion lol
Tan chapter 50 . 5/31/2019
Wtf!? My mind is more scrambled than my eggs.
Tan chapter 49 . 5/31/2019
Ooooooh! That's more clear now! This is fucking genius!
shannon30033 chapter 51 . 5/31/2019
Ok, wow! I read part of this to my husband and he thought it was the best premise of all the fanfiction ever. Perhaps the writers of Legion read your fanfic? Hmmmm.
Tan chapter 38 . 5/31/2019
An outtake!? You made me read a whole outtake!? Grrrr!
Tan chapter 31 . 5/30/2019
Well, this isn't very canon of Bella S.
Tan chapter 30 . 5/30/2019
Earlier Bella mention her and Edward are 18, so how can Jacob be 18 too?
Tan chapter 29 . 5/30/2019
Umm what? So is Bella F cheating on her hubby all this time?
Tan chapter 22 . 5/30/2019
This is fascinating! I really want to cheat by reading the reviews but I'm stopping myself! The self-control I'm applying is at its max capacity. Anymore confusion and I may give into my curiosity.
Tan chapter 10 . 5/29/2019
I am so lost. Why does Bella know about the future?
Tan chapter 9 . 5/29/2019
I thought the Bellas don't remember what the other says or does? Not very consistent. This story is immensely amusing, however!
Tan chapter 4 . 5/29/2019
Isn't Jacob underage in New Moon? Does that make the psyche of this new Bella a sexual predator? Cougar?
chellekathrynnn chapter 1 . 4/28/2019
DID isn't harmful. It’s not dangerous. No need to keep Bella’s kids away from her. Did you do your research at all?!
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