Sad on one hand but kinda what he deserved for being a big brained idiot. Still a great story.

I absolutely adored this xxxxxx

Ah -clutches chest- I'm still not over Journey's End. The bittersweetness of being happy that the doctor and Rose are together in some form-but HE still doesn't get the person he wants most...her.

First DW fic I've read ever, just stepping my toe in the fandom fic wise-not. bad. at. all.

Your first you say? Well you did a lovely job. Short and sweet-got me to the point without the unnecessary or too little. :3 I wanted to read some DW fictions to get an idea of how people write in the fandom-I'm really happy yours was the first and it was good. Well done. Keep going-I know I will.

By far the BEST "Rose and Doctor and Doctor-2.0 meet up" story that I've seen! :-) Absolutely wonderful!

Nice. I like how their kids have a mix of characteristics. That's seems to make sense.

This was really good, but for some reason left me very sad...in a good way. This would be a good character episode to give rose a cameo in a future series, just to show how she's doing. well done

Aw...this was quite a good story, worded nicely, and the characterisation was very well done. :)

excellent! do please write more, i'll read all of it :D

i can't even think of any helpful tips for a first-time poster, it all looks good to me :D

Well i could feel how difficult it was for the doctor to watch them and their family. Then at the end you actually made me cry. so i think you did a good job, you had that buildup of emotion and that worked well with the ending.