I know you said your rewriting the earlier chapters and that it will take 10 chapters of important set up until it really gets going. But I just can't for the life of me read 10 chapters worth of meh for just a chance at reading a good story.
So, sorry, but I'm going to find books that start out with me getting hooked, rather than read meh for 10 chapters and hope to get hooked afterward.

Thanks for the read!
- Vort

One of best pokemon fanfiction. Thank you very much author San. I hope you will continue to make more ash x Cynthia. Thank you very much

I was about to post my first review for this story talking about how hyped as shit I was for the battle, and your claims of the story only being a third of the way completed, but I accidentally clicked ‘next chapter’ instead and, well...

Can’t say I’m not disappointed.

Of course, I understand that you may have lost interest, and/or you don’t have the time to write, but seeing how your rewrite only has 2 chapters and hasn’t been updated in a year has me feeling dumb for getting hooked on this story I believed was completed.

Anyway, what you’ve got so far is great. If there ever comes a time where you continue writing this/the rewrite, I got my notifications ready so I can continue on as well.

Hope it won’t come to the point where I begin forgetting all of this if/when you update again, but take your time.

3AM ramble over, have a good one.

I don't what everyone's going on about when they say this is the "best prologue ever." I fucking skimmer 3/4's of it. Starting with an OC (?) then everything else with the timeskip ... I think I just don't like your slow pacing or whatever. I tried reading your Harry Potter earlier and skimmed through that, too. Can't get into your works. See ya'.

Huh, so Nel is Hunter J?

DIEHARD?! YOU ARE CALLING ME A DIEHARD?!

Nobelium Uranium my friend.

Checkmate.

Wow, it's been a few years since I read this, it was one of the first stories I read on this site. I vaguely remember a tattooed eeveelution girl, a tournament, aura guardians, Cynthia's royalty?, and time traveling cliffhanger?

Oh boy! Heck yeah! Thanks for the hard work! Been following it since 2009!

Interested in time gap. Will there be a prequel explaining what happened to Ash during those missing five years? Are you even still alive out there? A.K.A are you still posting on this site?

It's a really good story, had it's ups and downs but I think it'd be best if you don't delete it until after posting the first chapter of the remake. If possible I would like to do tinue reading this old one and compare it to the new version too but oh well.

Thank you for updating us and I'll patiently wait for whatever fancies your boat~

An amazing and well thought out story.
I was a bit confused by Cynthias ... well ... behaviour.
Was something like: Though act, but insecure maiden at heart.
But I guess it worked for this story.

I really hope that the plans for the rewrite still stand, cause I'd like to see where this plot goes (and how you plan on upgrading the plot to this point)

Cheers

Aww...but I do the see why you did this. I mean, it is pretty old, and remembering the general plot would be kinda hard... but anyway, I loved this story, really had me on ropes with those intense scenes a.k.a royal guardians/hunters/aura guardian. I really liked the style of writing too, made me feel like I was watching a movie instead . 10/10 from me!

please please please please please update this or do the rewrite

Will you ever keep your promise about a rewrite? Or have you ignored and abandoned it?

So have you abandoned this fully? When will we get the rewrite?! Its been 8 months getting close to a year now. What are you doing!?