Well, Alice... if you hadn't abandoned her... this wouldn't have happened.

Is edward okay? all there? and WHAT happens to BELLA? Love the story!

Sssssssssssssoooooooooo that Eddie is awake now.

that was great when are you putting up the next bit? :)

You have reached 40 so pleeeaaase UPDATE!

It's a little irksome to me that you have to beg for reviews and make ultimatums, but why not do it for the fun rather than the publicity? Oh well, this happens to be one of the more or less decent fan fictions of Twilight that I have read so far.

All these other fan fictions I've read all seem to come from the same hive. It almost shames me that most of these scenarios that I scroll through are things that I might have thought of at some point. _ The only difference is that many of them are poorly written!

WOULD ME SUBSCRIBING TO YOUR STORY COUNT FOR MORE THAN A MEASLY REVIEW? OwO

Okay, really good chapter!

I'm only confused about one thing, by what I read, the burning feeling and all, Bella's turning, but Carlisle said that no venom got in so she can't be, then I thought Carlisle could be lying to ease a bit of Edward's guilt, but since Edward can read his mind I think that's impossible... Therefore I'm officialy lost...

LOL

Anyways, update fast so I can see what really happened!

it was sooo good! I'm glad that you wrote this story! please write another chapter!

like it!

OE IT :) its so differnet x but in this chapter it didnt seem edward cared for bella when he found her xbuts thats my thoughts other than tht :D LOVE IT

This is great! Remember that Edward don't need the mirror to know what shocked Esme. He can just read it in her thoughts! :D

THIS WAS GREAT! I have acually had the idea of the voodoo doll myself, but nothing very concrete. PLEEAAASE, WRITE CHAPTER 6! PLEEEAAASE! (And by the way, please let Bells survive!)

the first story please about Bella's getting kidnapped

OMG POLL: NUMBER 1!

YOU ARE THE BEST writer ever! I like turtles! :D:D:D:D:D::):):):)_;P;P;P