Reviews for Have I Become The Enemy
creativesm75 chapter 21 . 9/30/2014
A bittersweet end. Nice
Masho chapter 21 . 6/25/2011
Um, awkward moment when the 'lul' turns out to be the second half of the fic.

I had to finish it, because the beginning was so amazing, and I don't know what to think of the ending. It feels right and I'm totally buying it, I don't, umm, 'wish you'd done better' at all: its so sad and grim, and I actually have no idea what will happen next, hypothetically.

Thank you, it was interesting and meaningful.

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Masho chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
HAH! I get it:D:D:D:D:D

I'm probs taking your fic way too seriously, but just coz I love it and its amazing and I don't ever want it to end.

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Masho chapter 5 . 6/24/2011
ewwwwwwwwwwwww! that's so sad!

You're such a good writer!

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Masho chapter 3 . 6/24/2011
This is mesmerizing, really..

heh, you've even dragged me down from my post-exam good mood (as in, my LAST exam :D:D:D:D:D:D) and its actually really scary, good writing.

It is also so annoying what you did in the very first bit- hate it when aiuthors do that, a bit; I'm so going to re read that afterwaards at least,. :S.

xxxx
Sachita chapter 21 . 6/2/2011
Oh wow, what an incredible story. A very unique plot and very well-written! I've seen quite a few stories in which Minerva and Tom had a child, but none like this one. Somehow I really could see it all happening. Poor poor Minerva but I think you really got everyone in character. Great job! Very well-done, kudos to you.
anonymouth chapter 21 . 1/11/2011
I just found this story and read it all the way through in one go.

Your writing is beautiful, I felt completely enthralled by the story and the emotions running through it.

I felt for Minerva so much throughout it all, but you also managed to portray Snape in a way that, whilst not making him by any means a hero, or even a likeable character, I couldn't hate him; merely feel for him; I think he showed more than any other character (apart from Minerva) the suffering and loss because of one twisted logic.

It was a brilliant, bittersweet ending. Thank you :)
Mrs Rodolphus Lestrange chapter 21 . 3/20/2010
This was an awesome story. i luved every minute. MMTR is my fav pairing and i dont mind MMAD, i know my pen name suggests otherwise. Luv ur penname and ive read 2 of ur stories.
Greathe chapter 21 . 2/14/2010
Kudos for a good story.
Merida Hughsie chapter 21 . 2/13/2010
Wonderful ending fit for a wonderful story. I could picture it all in my mind, it was simply brilliant.

Lg Andrea
Tchitchina chapter 21 . 2/12/2010
That was a great story! I don't know what else to say heehe I really enjoyed reading it I hope you'll keep on writing such good fics
eternal vampire chapter 21 . 2/11/2010
Oh woiw. Deep and sad the perfect end to one of the most perfect stories I have ever read. Thank you for the experiance.
katye chapter 20 . 2/8/2010
wa ha ho! amazing story, very well told. are we gonna get a closing chapter or two?
eternal vampire chapter 20 . 2/8/2010
You are such a good writer. I love this story. I have to send it to my friend right away. She was asking about it just the other day. Looking forward to much more from you, can't wait for the next installment. Will Minerva greive over her son. I believe so, he was a lost soul to her from the beginning. Take care and have a great night.
MarinaB chapter 20 . 2/7/2010
OMG! Just loved the last scene... "Once upon a time you would have been right"... This sentence had such a power! Thanks for the reading!
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