A great story. Very well written.

OHMYGODYESCONTINUE PLEASE#!

Continue! This is funny!

I was half way through before I realized that I had read this before, and then I went "Wait, what, isn't this AliceCullen7a4's?" and then I realized that it WAS you... :-)

But I still think it's good, like I did in class last year, but you should do something to distinguish the X writing to X parts so it dosent look like part of a letter.

And I think that you need to work on your other story. SO WORK ON IT! Please? :-)