| Reviews for Look Past the Veil of Hate |
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nbrian72 chapter 20 . 4/10/2018 Update? |
storiesrmyjam chapter 20 . 6/18/2017 pleasssseeeee continue i love this... |
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 10/18/2014 What a controlling jerk |
Motherof8 chapter 7 . 10/18/2014 Lovin it |
Motherof8 chapter 19 . 10/18/2014 Love this story |
Motherof8 chapter 20 . 4/4/2014 Can you update, please? |
ilovetwilight4eversims3 chapter 20 . 1/17/2014 Hi there! Omg I just read this whole story in like 2/3 days max! And it was SOOOO amazing! I was a bit ceptic at first but you git me with your words! I noticed that you haven't updated in a REALLY LONG time but i was just wondering if you were thinking about updating or if you had given up on this story (not judging you btw). Well now that that's out of the way I just want to say that this story and this characters of yours are just WONDERFUL! With every chapter I read i only thought next please. More, more, more! Anyhow! Just wanted to share my love for this story! Xoxo, Rafaela :D |
Guest chapter 20 . 12/18/2013 You should keep writing this is good |
Guest chapter 20 . 11/13/2013 You very good this story in very interesting |
Guest chapter 20 . 11/7/2013 This chapter was pretty cool |
Guest chapter 20 . 10/30/2013 It's so entertaining |
samantha nieto chapter 1 . 10/21/2013 its considered fan fiction because how she said that song, " Tik Tok " by kesha . that wasnt in the movie or the book . because the fan fiction doesnt sound that much similar to the actuall story . the actuall story sounds more good . I think its harmful for writers and readers because its not really what the story really is, its just what the other people that do the fan fiction is what they thought and what they wanted to put . |
AFgurl chapter 4 . 7/31/2013 This story is pretty good, besides the spelling and grammar errours. Well, it's not reallu my flavour because you did something only a git would do; you COMPLETELY changed the bloody characters into humans! I know that it's Fanfiction and everything, but it's kind of loserly. I need to delete my account later on. I mean, why not put your skills to the test and write your OWN story?! You have some talents, and by the looks of it, lots of other love your written pieces. Since they don't follow the plot, why not just change the characters' names and create your own work of art, yes? |
Guest chapter 20 . 4/21/2013 Please please put up the next chapter! I love this story! ;) Please hurry! |
BookLuver chapter 20 . 2/17/2013 This story is amazing. Whenever I think of a Fanfiction for twilight, it always think this is how it would be. I love the idea that Bella can sing, it makes here seem a lot less plain. And the extra characters are great as well. All in all, this is a great plot line and a great Fanfiction. Great job! I hope you update soon. |