Great chapter please continue soon

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

OOOOOOOh nice chapter. I understand how mood effects writing, anyway the only thing I know about they're parents is that they likely are dead either from the first war since she enlisted apparently after the fall of orb, alongside shinn and rey that said no concrete information exists about they're parents.

It’s great to see that this story is still being updated

Well... I looking forward to see Nicol reaction to Lunamaria being captured... and how Rey failed to help her.

Next chapter most likely would be very awesome. The reaction to freedom always fun too see. Just sad how the author allowed shin to destroy freedom.

Hmmm interesting take of Lunamaria captured and then she bumps into her sister on the Archangel.

Loving this so far!

great chapter please continue soon

First off great chapter honestly have been waiting for this to update it is one of my top 3 fics on this site. Of the mass-produced units I personally like the Ginn/C.G.U.E. (i prefer to think of the C.G.U.E. as a variant of the ginn for vets), bucue (reminds me of a beloved pet), and lastly the gouf ignited because i think the extendable sword looks awesome. In regards to the painful encouter with yuna, you made me flinch in phantom pain did you have to be so descriptive?

Of course the Murasames are the best mass produced ms. Nothing can be better than your own transforming mobile suit, well except get your own gundam. I know it's not gonna happen here with Cagalli's pregnancy and all, but I'm still a bit disappointed that she didn't pilot the Akatsuki because I'd like to see her kicking Shinn's emo ass and not be trashed so easily like in GSD. We know she is a better pilot than that.
Cagalli beating the life out of Yuna will always be one of my favorite scenes in GSD, and I also enjoyed it here. Even though I wanted her to beat him a lot more I also didn't want her to waste her energy on unimportant matter like that.
Also I can't help but notice that your writing has improved a lot. That shows that you are a dedicated writer and I admire you for that.

Thanks for the chapter

This is an excellent story so far

The only thing I didn’t like about it was that you didn’t include the junius seven incident that occurred in Episode 6 and 7 of Seed Destiny

Honestly I truthfully want Shinn to survive and change with the help of Mayu and actually turn him into a decent character like they failed to do in canon and only bettered him in those SRW Games. Shinn actually became likable there. And yeah, I did notice Shinn is more unstable here than in actual canon. The kid wasn't this insane. Emo and angry yeah but not this crazy.

Heck in fact I want Shinn to actually defect somehow. And Mayu can be that key and guide him to rehabilitation.

Will Kira show up with Strike Freedom with Lacus and the DOM Troopers? That sounds really interesting if they decides to show up.

Personally I like the Murasame the best out the mass produce ms.

thanks 4 new chapter,,