Emmett says to Bella, "come to papa." That was great.

This story was so interesting and as I finished it the characters still haunt me. It did not go at all how I thought it would, and yet, that was the best part. It was unpredictable, especially because I was rooted for a relationship to develop but as the plot went on, I started to feel Bella’s fear and disgust, it was simply amazing! I loved it! Thanks for sharing this story with us!

Great story. Loved it. Thank you.

Aw darn! As a huge a CxB fan, I got excited there for a minute, lol.

You went entirely too far with what my English professor would call "puffery". It make it a bit torturous to read, so I am quitting this story here at chapter 7. On to better things.

This would be better if it was more concise.

I gave of on reading E&B fics for a while for non canon fics and after reading this I realized no one wrote a physcotic demented Edward like canon writers.

If you're are going to villianize edward make it believable and this right here is what I'm talking about not the usual "I hate Edward so I'm gonna make him the bad guy" which is what majority of non canon fics is about.
Thank you for taking me on this glorious journey.

This man is so fucking cruel. I guess they are not mates in this story.

Crap!

I guess this is not a love story

Again...WTF

WTF!

Oh shit!

Oh crap, that's not your imagination.

Raggdolly, my love this is easily in my top five "greatest fics of all time" list.