So many years later, I finally understand the ending.
It's even sadder than it was before.
Thank you again, for the ride.

Don't end it there! QAQ I'm crying, there gotta be more. Tell me they get together again QAQ the feeels

how dare you rip out my heart like that

Please make a sequel please. My heart is going to pop. D:

Alright, so it's been like half an hour or so and I've taken a shower and bawled a little bit but I've regained my composure minutely. I came back to review properly.

I *honestly* don't have anything to criticize about the story. You probably see a lot of mistakes but I personally think this story was exquisitely written. Everything about the plot was woven in perfectly and I really enjoyed it. Spy and Scout were really in character - I almost accepted it as canon at the end before I realized I was reading a fanfiction. On fanfiction dot net. Good job, me.

All in all, I think your writing is outstanding and good golly, I hope you'll notify me if you ever publish a book because I promise you I will buy it.

:) 10/10 would read again

OH MY GOD. I CANT BELIEVE THE END WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO ME. OH MY FUCKING GOD I WANTED A HAPPY ENDING SO BAD I WAS SO FUCKING READY TO SIGH AFTTER A HAPPY END HOLY SHIT I AM SOOOO SAD.

omg. Omg. OH MY GOD.

Thanks for the sadness I'm so sad oh my god no spy why are you doing this please just GO BACKKKKK I WANT.

okay let me go cry to myself.

The final line broke my heart.

Well, time to cry myself to sleep now while listening to Ave Maria

I am so pissed at the ending, it's not the normal kind of cliché happy ending where their true love will forever prevail, I hate it so much, but I also love it to no ends, it is dramaticaly good and it leaves such a horrible yet awesome feeling for reading it.
I am outraged by the ending but I love it because it's like nothing I expected, and I don't think I've ever read something like it before.
Worst possible ending ever, but still sooo good.

The story is really awesome, and the ending is a mixture of feelings I can't even begin to comprehend right now.

I'm going to cry even more if Sean's story doesn't continue on from this cliffhanger :'(
This was written so well that I got waaay more attached to it than I thought I would. Just hope that there's more plot coming after this heartbreaking ending, preferably a good ending. Otherwise, I loved the hours I spent reading it, even though my eyes are like a waterfall right now. :)

you should do a sequel

Bravo, all I can say is bravo.
Your story nearly made me cry, if it wasn't because I already saw the end was going to be sad.
So bravo!

I see what you did with the title of this one, hehehehe...

I like your roommate's synopsis XDD

QAQ
I STARTED READING THIS A FEW HOURS AGO LIKE 'ooh this sounds interesting'
NOW IM SAT HERE TYPING THIS AT 4AM BAWLING LIKE A TINY BABY
THE ENDING IS SO SAD AND AND AND *sobs*
Really good work, so tragic D: