This was wonderful. I'm so glad that Jim and Spock (both sets lol) got together and found home. I would love to read more in this story line.

I feel like Spock resembles an artichoke more than an onion. You know, green, pointy, and lethal looking to the point where you have to deliberately peel away the layers and really like artichokes in order to enjoy it

...now I want to see the younger ones(maybe even the rest of the main crew as well as a bonus) react to learning that James was an Admiral...

Love the irony/dejavu of Jim meeting (or at least talking to) his alternate self in a cave, stranded, then rescued, and stating what he thought of the situation presented to him; just like with Spock Prime. Had a good laugh at that line. Especially as I pictured his face when he saw himself and then felt his brain completely stall. :)

This story was Epic! I love it sooo much it was such an emotional and loving story! And the Sex... So HOT! I wished you would consider a sequel or prologue to see what happens after their reunion! And maybe see come true what Young Kirk propose to young Spock "Wink " "Wink"

and finish whit:

"It was exhausting. Not a bad way, but even though I believe that all events were no more than two days, it felt like a long journey, perhaps because we have dealt here not with one but two Spirk, that should solve the problems.
And it was lovely:
One have to come to each other.
the other return each other.

"What that found, which would be returned"

This sentence was constantly in my head (not in this version of course) I have no idea from where.

I had to recruit more mental strength to to deal with the rush,
But nevertheless I thank you for choosing to deal bravely with the two "so similar yet not identical" couples
That in this universe, or other as it is almost a course with emotion.

oo and the last two paragraphs you wrote?
I really felt I was reading a fairy tale."

and i remember:

"Oh God, oh God, oh my God (in tears) of this chapter messed with my heart all along.
But once a confession of Spock, I felt like running it in a marathon.
In the seal line, you tore my heart."

and olso:

"(Rubbing my hands with delight)
Oh, goody, the game begins.. Who brought the popcorn?"

i was wrote then:
(Thinking to myself)
looks promising, tnd I have patience.. I'll be waiting!

That scene in TMP you described above is also the one scene that is shown to everyone who doesn't believe in KS. To say: See, it's right there before your eyes. I liked it that you opened the chapters with quotes from the various movies and TOS episodes.

Wow, this was really beautiful, the plot was great, the characters were believable, the story was well written and therefore I deeply recommend this to anyone! It had been a long time since I've cried while reading a fic; this story touched deep inside my soul and I thank you for that. :)

Very well written, I rather wished Original Kirk would show up in the new universe too, and you captured the story well. Thanks!

OMG THE BEAUTY AND THE ANGST AND THE ROMANCE AND THE WONDERFULNESS! *is incoherent*

This totally should have happened, because it's true - only James T. Kirk would overcome the odds, and death itself, to return to his t'hy'la. SO LOVELY! *flails*

Love this so much! Thank you for sharing! :)

This is officially the true ending. My mind has registered it and it's already done. I freaking enjoyed how you brought them together and I love you for writing this.I felt the same,so very sad that Spock is alone and hey! That stupid generation movie is hardly canon when creators themselves don't like it and write novels to correct it so HELL IS WHAT ACTUALLY HAPPENED1

Absolutely, awesomely freaking amazing story. Not sure if that's grammatically correct, but I don't care, that's just what I think :)