Reviews for Original Sin
PepperCornPie chapter 40 . 6/28/2018
Finally took the time to read this amazing story! it was recommended to me and im so glad i read it :) thank you for writing suck an interesting story!
From beginning and end I was hooked. I also think you ended the story really well. I Think she really fits as Cat women now and the relationship between the cat and the bat works so well!
serrine chapter 40 . 6/28/2018
I re-read this story again for the first time in about four years and it is still to this day, hands down, the best fanfiction I have ever read. It satisfies me on every level. I absolutely love how you wrote Selina Kyle. It's how I also imagined her to be, not the dreary-too-serious DKR version. You portrayed her with every angle I imagine her to have: serious, playful, emotional, physical, venerable, and strong.

When a character cries a lot I usually get annoyed, but I felt for Seline every time she cried throughout this entire story. Each time was justified. I mean, her life was a complete mess there for awhile!

The way you wrote the Joker and Bruce was fabulous, even Alfred was just as I imagined. I could actually hear the actors voices in my head as I read their lines as if I were watching a movie. It was like you channeled your inner-Nolan as you wrote this in some aspect. All in all, your characters were on point and never ONCE did I feel they felt out of character or strange. Wonderful.

Your fight scenes are incredible. You never break flow or go overboard with your action. I find it to be the perfect balance between action and dialogue.

The dynamic of Selina and her heart and who to choose was just delicious. I love me some great love triangles and man did you deliver. I don't know if I'm happy she chose Jack in the end. I am happy but I'm sad it wasn't Bruce. I felt just as conflicted as Selina did trying to make up her damn mind.

I love where you left the characters and how they entwine with one another. I love that you incorporated this chase aspect that Batman and Catwoman have. It was something I was always drawn to in other iterations of their relationship.

You are such a wonderful writer. If you have any original ideas for a novel WRITE IT. I would read it in a heartbeat. Your style and flow are just wonderful. It inspired me all those years ago when I first read this in high school. Now I'm writing my own fanfic and honestly, you're one of the reasons why.

I see you wrote a sequel. I actually yelped when I saw that. I also see you haven't updated in over two years, but I hold out and have hope. I will never forget when you updated this story after that long hiatus but man was it worth the wait.

Eternally your fan,
Serrine
jessbesublime chapter 21 . 6/21/2018
I knew he would escape fast!
jessbesublime chapter 20 . 6/19/2018
JONAH!
jessbesublime chapter 19 . 6/19/2018
Bruce probably saw the interaction between Joker and Selina! That’s why he’s interested now
jessbesublime chapter 18 . 6/19/2018
SHE SAW JACK/JOKER OMG
jessbesublime chapter 17 . 6/19/2018
She’s a business woman and cat woman now!
jessbesublime chapter 16 . 6/19/2018
I have to admit it...I’m crying
jessbesublime chapter 15 . 6/19/2018
Selina deserved a light care free moment. I hope Bruce isn’t mad at her
jessbesublime chapter 14 . 6/19/2018
WHY COULDNT TONY LEAVE JACK ALONE!? WHY!?
jessbesublime chapter 13 . 6/19/2018
Is it bad that I don’t feel sorry for Suzie? She attacked Selina first...
jessbesublime chapter 12 . 6/19/2018
I feel bad for Ally. She’s been through so much and I always knew there was something up with Rene
jessbesublime chapter 11 . 6/19/2018
Im sad about Jonah but I’m glad he protected Jack
jessbesublime chapter 10 . 6/19/2018
I CANT BELIEVE THAT ASSHOLE TRIED TO RAPE SELINA
jessbesublime chapter 9 . 6/19/2018
WHAT DID JACK DO TO RENE OMG
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